This story was suppose to be more darker. With F/n actually being a Schnee instead of a Xiao Long. And F/n would have to deal with being the scapegoat for Winter's misdeeds, Weiss's practice dummy for combat practice and he wasn't allowed to hold a weapon. Willow using a whip on him everyday due to the fact he was a bastard child of a dead ranks maid, and she would use him for... Various things. And Witly would end sending the knight from the white trailer To ultimately try to kill F/n. Only for Shannan to save F/n's life after he manage to defeat the knight. By shielding his body when Jacques tries to shoot F/n multiple times. At the end, they would discard the bodies by throwing them into the ocean. All for a fishing vessel to save F/n's life as the wounds he received cost him to lose his arm and his legs.
But I decided not to that considering I thought that would be ... Harsh to a degree that I would be surprised if F/n didn't just straight up killed himself. Plus I feel like Jacques would just use F/n and not feel sorry for it, just like Weiss.
But what do you all think? Was I right about it being dark, or an I just a pansy? Leave a comment down below and tell me your thoughts. Until then have a good day.
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A shattered heart: RWBY x neglected and abused Male reader
FanfictionSometimes love can the be the one thing that makes a life worthwhile, at least that's my case. My name was F/n Xiao long, but I prefer F/n L/n. And this my story.
