Naruto: A New Ninja World (Not FInished)

Chapter 1: The Beginning

First book he so hope yall dont mind, i also need some input if it makes sense or not. I think it does so please help me out.

Oh and have fun reading

Found pic of jak, its already up

Jak

I race through the forest as fast as my feet could take me trying my best not to look back . Keeping my eyes locked in front of me as I kept telling myself, "Alittle more, com on." so I wouldn't look back.

 I would then jump to the ground and hide behind a tree taking in deep breathes as soundlessly as I could. My eyes tracing where I came from for any signs of the enemy, but there was nothing.

 I stood there for what seemed like an eternity thinking of what to do next. "Should I keep running, should I rest, should shout for help".

As i would go over these thoughts in my mind, I hear the bushes rattle. I quickly jump back up into the tree while taking out a kunai from my pouch.

My eyes focused on the bush as i wait for something to come out. A small squirrel would then rush out of the bush and up a tree.

 I sigh as the squirrel ran up the tree disappering into the branches. "Guess im just to paranoid." he would mumble to himself as he looked around him making sure he wasn't followed.

He would then spot an opening in the forest ahead of him. "good there is no way they will follow me into the open." I thinks aloud, not notciing, I start to jump from tree to tree.

 I stop a few yard  away from the opening and look all along it. There was no body around for what seemed as miles on each side.

 I then look Behind me once more checking for any signs of the enemy. None, not a single presnse. I decide to follow the path while staying hidden in the trees as I would keep going till I reach a huge gate with the leaf symbol on it.

"Oh, is this.." I would mumble as I am interrupted by a kunai flying right passed my head and lodges itself into the tree i was standing on. Blood would begin to flow down my cheek as i count 5 ninja as they quickly surround me brandishing kunai.

"Who are you and why are you hanging around here this late at night." one of the ninja would ask while standing in the tree infront of me.

 I would look around and take a kunai out my pouch and hold it in fightning postion. "I was just passing through, is it really okay for 5 ninja to surround a single boys?" I say raising my kunai getting ready to fight.

"Well looks like we found one with a mouth." the ninja would say as he would take out a chain. "Resist and you will be forcibly removed." another would say

. "Tch fine." I mumble as the ninja would bind him. "This is going to be a long day." I say aloud as im is taken inside the leaf village surrounded by three ninja. The other two would go back on patrol.

Third person

The Hokage would sigh as he would fill out the paperwork for his village. He would rather be out doing a mission but nooo, his assistant wont let.

He should make a clone and leave. He would changes his mind and  look up as he sensed someone approach the door. "No need to knock, come in." He would say as the door would open showing a boy, no older then 13, in chains.

The boy had short brown hair with greenish blue colored eyes. The Hokages first impression of the boy is well hes a boy. The three ninja surrounding the boy would greet the hokage simultaneously as they entered.