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I, Valentine

Alison read that note, put on her coat and immediately went out. She was what we could call an average woman, nothing incredibly abnormal for a 20 year old woman. She had grey eyes, red hairs and her face was filled with red as her hairs freckles. She was wearing a beautiful green coat, which covered her head to knees, a white shirt and a pair of black trousers.
Her day had been pretty average, but that note sure cheered it up: it was valentine's day, afterall!

Back to the note, this was signed "Luke Cosby", a really dear friend of her. They had met, due to famili buisness, when she was only five, and he was seven. They always stayed together and, in a few instances, they even worked together: once in a bank, another time in a pub, once even by the streets!

But they were more than friends, or collegues.

As she was walking to the restaurant where she would have met Luke, she started looking at all the couples kissing, walking hand in hand, staying together. As much as she said she didn't like seeing all those couples, she always dreamed about being one of them: those big fancy dresses, gifts, jewels... She was not a "love woman", but those thing always fascinated her.

In the end, she arrived at the restaurant: "Le Louvre".
Weird name for a restaurant, but at least it gave it that weird yet fascinating French atmosphere, the one couples on valentine's day love so much.
Luke was right there, waiting for alison. He was a 22 year old men, with brown eyes, short blonde hair and a scar on his forhead. He was wearing a pair of jeans, a white shirt and a black leather jacket.
He ran towards Alison as soon as he saw her, they talked for a bit of time, and then they decided to go in. The restaurantwas full, full of couples, kissing, giving gift ecc. It was valentine's day, afterall.
Luckily Luke had booked a table, a pretty close to the entrance one, so they were covered.

They took their seats and started talking again.
"So" started Luke "have you got everything?"
"Of course it's all in the coat" answered Alison, as she gave him said coat.
Luke picked something from one of the internal pockets of the coat, and hid it in his leather jacked
"Nice" he said "Now do as I do, and we'll get out of here rich"

He gave Alison her coat back, and she put it back on.
Then he got up, and picked the thing from his jacket:it was a snub nose, 3.57 revolver. He shot in the air and screamed "this is a robbery: get down, give us money, or jewels, or whatever valuable you have, or we'll shoot again"
Needless to say, Alison did the same, even though she had a semiauto 9mm beretta 92 handgun.
Most people had already hit the ground when luke had shot in the air, and many other did too after he had spoken. However, some people decided to stand up, maybe they were too stupid, maybe they didn't want their valentines to see them as cowards, or maybe they thought it was a prank.
What really matters, is that those people are the reason it all ended in a bloodbath.

As I said, Luke and Alison were more than friends, or collegues. Once they swore loyalty to the mob, they were brothers.