Fifteenth Visit
Louis came this time just to have a kind chat with Zayn. Even though Louis will always hold the beginning and end of the conversation at all times.
Louis opened the door slowly and there lay the same old haggard looking Zayn. Louis pulled the metal chair and turned the TV at a low volume just in case there’s a an awkward silence. The show playing was FRIENDS, wow way to go teli FRIENDS seriously? If you’re going to play Zayn’s favorite show at least wait until he’s awake so he can enjoy it. Louis thought to himself.
“So, hi, Zayn, I just came here to talk to you since all I do is sing you songs, we haven’t talked in a while,” Louis started off.
“I really just want to thank you for everything, for all the tough times I’ve had at the X Factor or with the fans, or just anything that would go on in my life, you were always there when I needed you and you would always listen and it just means the world to me thank you so much,” Louis started a big thank you speech, “I’m so sorry for anything I might have done to hurt you. I really am. I hope I never hurt your feelings too badly, if I did so, I am so sorry maybe it might have looked like banter in my eyes, but it didn’t in yours. And I just want to say I’m sorry for anything I might have done to hurt you.”
Louis laughed at himself, “Remember that time with Paul where we were getting away from him secretly and he had to go looking for us all around the city? And then the fans made this funny posters about us being lost and if they found us to call Paul? …That was a really fun experience,” Louis laughed quietly.
“I just really want to thank you for everything, you’ve been such an amazing friend and I just really love you and I just want to thank you for everything you’ve done for me,” Louis added, “You are really the greatest of friends,”
With that Louis shut the teli off, got up silently and closed the door as quietly as possible.
Sixteenth Visit
Louis came again to visit Zayn and opened the door quietly and he heard a woman’s voice, Tricia. Louis didn’t come in, he closed the door quietly, but he could still hear Tricia from outside, he waited for a silence so he could come in.
“You don’t know how proud we are of you honey,” Her voice said from inside the room, Louis heard that her voice was cracking and she was preventing from crying, “Your sisters look up to you, honey. Thousands of girls look up to you. They love you. They dedicate their life to you. You’ll make it through; I’ll be by your side every day, sweetie,”
Louis then heard Tricia sob. Louis opened the door not so quietly now, he opened it a bit loudly so Tricia heard him.
“L-Louis,” Zayn’s mom said brokenly.
Louis took in all of Tricia’s features; she looked exactly like a female replica of Zayn. Their face was shaped exactly and it broke Louis’ heart to see her so broken, because she looked like Zayn and Louis never saw Zayn look broken and basically here was a female twin of Zayn crying. It really was making Louis’ heart shatter slowly and painfully.
Louis went and hugged Tricia tightly. Tricia hugged Louis tightly and all her tears stained Lou’s stripped shirt.
“He-he,” Tricia started to talk but all the sobs got the best of her, “He…he doesn’t deserve this, Louis… No one does,”
Louis squeezed Tricia tightly, “I know,”
It broke Louis’ heart to see Tricia crying this hard. Tricia pulled back and smiled at Louis sadly, “Thank you… Thank you for visiting him so often, the nurses always tell me how often you visit him. I just want to thank you for being such a great friend,”
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visiting zayn // zouis
Fanfictionzayn malik gets in a tragic car accident and ends up in a deathly coma. louis tomlinson, fellow band mate, takes it upon himself to visit him as many days as he can. these are the twenty-one visits paid by louis to zayn.
