chapter one: Tris' POV

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hey guys! I just want to say quickly, I'm writing this on my tablet Soooo... may have a few autocorrect errors, I'll reread after I finish the chapter and try to remove errors, but I make no promises.

disclaimer: I don't own the divergent characters, plotline, or anything else of that nature. no copyright infringement intended

I see my name on the list and release the breath I didn't realize I had been holding. I'm first! I cheer when I see that Christina and will have gone through as well. I turn around to congratulate them and see Tobias standing behind me.

"do you think a hug would give away too much?" he asks, smiling down at me. "you know," I reply, "I don't care." I stand up on my tiptoes and press my lips to his. in that moment I feel happier than I ever have.

I hear a cough and pull away from Tobias and see Christina and Will staring at me, clearly asking with their eyes, 'when did this happen?' before I have a chance to speak Christina grabs my arm and pulls me away, I wave to Tobias with my free hand and see him laugh before we turn a corner. As soon as we're alone Christina looks at me expectantly, silently asking me to explain what happened. "OK, OK" I say, giving in, I tell her everything that has happened over the last few days, leaving out a few important details.

she squeals, asking question after question, "have you gone on a date?" "when was your first kiss?" "when did you relies you liked him?" "have you done it" my face grows red at that one, I try to hide my blush with my hair as Christina laughs, saying something about how my abnegation is showing. I look down at my black combat boots, silently praying for someone to come distract Christina .

literally just as this thought comes through my mind, Will comes up and gives Christina a quick kiss and says softly, "Zeke's having an party later and asked if we could come." She grins, looking up at me, "Tris?" she asks, Will already knows her answer, he was asking me more so than her. "Four will be there" Will adds. OK, I relent I'll go. 

"yay" Christina yells, earning us a strange glance from a few people passing by. "come on Tris, we've gotta go shopping before the party." I groan, sending will a death glare as Christina drags me to the stores.

Soooo.... first chapter!!! wooo!!!!! anyways... I may not update on a regular bases, but I do promise to end the story if I ever get bored, and not just leave it. but I don't plan on doing that anytime soon. anyway, byeeee!!!

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