Describe the pain don't be too persist like: My hand was jelly his punch hit my left cheek and my top tooth on the left side fell on to my right leg. Blood only fell on my chin.
Describe the pain please or is he numb?!? I'm not joking I hear books like this and don't throw in fight scenes just for FUN! THEY have a purpose people!
1.pain
2. Purpose
3. Moves the plot forward
4. Don't be too detailed
5. Have fun with the scenes
6. DESCRIBE
7. Have music to help you go freely
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Non-FictionHi, I don't have much readers or followers or much votes and that's okay but I do know when your new your scarred and you just do what's popular.