Another chance, should I go?

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Jane's POV: I can't see anything and I can't move but I can hear and feel. "Your daughter! Your own flesh and blood and you don't even think twice about shooting her?!" I heard Cameron scream as the door opened. "What is going on in here?" The police officer says. "She just shot Jane." Mahogany cries pointing at Cindy but not letting go of my hand. I heard cries that did not belong to Mahogany but I couldn't identify who they belonged to.

I felt arms around me, it was Shawn.  I could tell was because he has this smell and it's just perfect. How is it so perfect?
Moments later I was picked up and put on something. A gernnie? Yeah a gernnie. In what felt like hours the gernnie was picked up and I was taken into the hospital I'm guessing. "What happened?" Someone's voice who I don't recognize says. "She was shot near her heart and already had broken ribs, a broken leg, and a fractured arm. So she's in pretty bad shape and I don't know if she will make it." Someone else says. It's only moments before I'm being hooked up to multiple things and being jabbed with needles and things. "IS SHE GONNA BE OK?" I heard Mahogany and a few of the boys scream. "Excuse me but no one is allowed in here." Someone said so calm, so very calm. Then, I'm back. I'm back in...heaven? I've been here before! Oh no am I actually dead this time? "No, you're not dead Jane, not yet." He says. "Then why am I here?"
"Because the doctors have to try to save you and if they don't then your stay here will be permanent. The chances of you living are very slim, so tell me Jane, are you ready to die?"
"No. I can't. Not yet. Please?"I whimper and he says nothing for a moment.

"While the doctors are finishing I'll have someone show you around up here." I nod as a girl about 20 and a boy about 12 walk toward me. The girl had pink hair and straight white teeth. And was really pretty. The boy had brown hair, green/blue eyes, and a perfect smile. Not gonna lie he was really cute. "Haha thanks." He said. "Uh I said that out loud?" I said embarrassed.
"No we can just hear what your thinking." He says like yeah hearing what someone's thinking is totally normal. That's just great. They help me up from the ground and start to walk away so I follow. We walk down a golden road until they turn into a bakery looking place. "Hey Ms.Burkwell. This is Jane. She may be joining us very soon." The girl says. The other woman nods and we leave. They show me all of the perks to being up here.You don't have to walk you can fly. You can imagine an outfit and instantly have it. After we were done touring around they took me to a diner. "Now! Just imagine something you want to eat." The boy says. "But I'm not--" "you don't have to be, you just have to be up here." "Ok--and what are your names? And how do you know mine?" I just thought about how the first place we went to the introduced me but how did they know my name? "Well we knew your name because we were assigned to watch you while you were on earth. And I'm Skylar, and this is my brother Cameron." The girl-Skylar said. I laughed a little bit at her last sentence. "What's so funny?" Cameron said. "It's just that my friend-well big brothers name is Cameron." I said wanting to cry thinking about him. "Oh that's so cool, what's he like?" I Cameron said and we took a seat I ignored his question. "NOW TRY!" He scream whined. "Ok ok." I said and thought about spaghetti. And sure enough there it is. Cameron smirks and Skylar claps amused as they both get--imagine? Spaghetti too.  When we finish eating we play laser tag. "I'm gonna win!" Sky laughs as we start. "Oh that is so not happening!" I scream shooting at her. "Girls." Cameron sighs as he shakes his head. Me and Sky look at each other then him and shoot. "Hey no fair!" Cameron whines and he looks a little like this😫😫. I really like it here. "Hey can I talk to you? In private?" Cameron says and I nod and follow him outside. "So me and Skylar--Sky were supposed to tell you this but she said she'd feel bad for making you choose so I'm gonna tell you myself." He starts off. I nod telling him to continue. "Well when you said or thought you liked it here I figured I should ask now. Ok. Here goes nothing. So you can either stay up here with us now...or you could go back down there and eventually come up here, your body's ready for you to return but if you don't want to then that's ok too. But honestly Jane?" I look up and meet his eyes. "You've got a whole life down there and it won't wait. We will. Go home." Well he had a point but I don't know anymore. "I'm going to--

(What do you think Jane will do? Comment your thoughts and I will try to update soon.

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