Feedback, suggestions?

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I hope some people have gotten a chance to read.

I would love some feedback, positive or negative. I have a general plan for the story, but I would love to know how people feel about the general introduction to the plot, like it or not.

I want to be able to change if change is what is needed!

Thanks, I appreciate all the help!

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⏰ Last updated: Oct 02, 2010 ⏰

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