Vampire/Werewolf Winners

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Judges:

ABusySpellingBee
whatislive
meraki_gal
Jay-Elizabeth

In first place is The Red Guard: Vampire Hunters Of Vatican City by traci_edmunds 
Score: 56/60
Review: title: 4 (very related to plot, eye-catching)

cover: 2 (not aesthetically pleasing, related to plot, not eye-catching)

summary: 5 (eye-catching, hooks reader)

plot development: 10 (strong exposition

character development: 10 (Chloe, the first Vampire, and the priest are developed well and quickly)

grammar: 15 (flawless)

personal Enjoyment: 10

ABusySpellingBee 

In second place is Lord Monticrox by wren_parsons 
Score: 54/60
Review: I thoroughly enjoyed this book. I was transported into a world that I never visited before were I find myself wondering what will happen next. I appreciate the creativity and originality of the characters and how their story is unfolding. It was not at all what I expected and I love that! This book has great descriptions that helped transport me right into the story. Some small grammatical errors here and there, but nothing that impacted the flow of the story. Great job and I look forward to reading more. ~ Jay-Elizabeth

In third place is The First Female Malga by Write_4Ever_ 
Score: 51/60
Review: title: 3 (slightly cliche but mostly original, directly relates to plot, slightly eye-catching)

cover: 4 (aesthetically pleasing, eye-catching, generic)

summary: 4 (intriguing but not really hooking well)

plot development: 7 (Well done, relationship is realistically depicted, foreshadowing is done nicely till reveals, strong exposition, strong rising action, unclear climax/falling action/denouement)

character development: 9 (good character development, inconsistencies in Dylan's character however)

grammar: 14 (slight grammatical errors)

personal Enjoyment: 10

ABusySpellingBee 

Congrats to everyone! The other reviews will be put into a separate book.

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