l am a Ronit Roy fan and the first movie Jaan Tere Naam is my all time favorite. Here, l began as a fan fiction but story turned out as supense -thriller novel with Farheen, Palak Jain and Ronit. l am just taking the characters name Sunil and Pinky...
Payu was feeling that something was fishy. She send her friend Poonam and her mother Pihu to call Pinky and distract her mother from Asha's bad company. Mumma did not listen to anyone and Asha was making her drink. Sunil was busy with his friends. Pihu requested Sunil to dance with her. Sunil and Pihu danced on the song:
Toose Naina Jab se Mile Toosenainajabsemile Ban gaye sil silsile...
Pinky was now tight and she could not bear the sight.
She emptied the entire beer bottle and gulped in a go. She started singing loudly.
Dil to dil hein Dil ka kya hein Is pe aya Us pe aya Dil hi samjhe Dil ki maaya Puchye toh zaara Mujh ko kya chahiye Dard ke dil Ke mujhe bas dawa chahiye...
She was swinging here and there. Sunil was walking towards her. She was creating a drama. She could not see anything and she clapped , smiled and winked.
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Payu too was embarrassed. Mummy is behaving like a kid. Mummy you are going to be a mother in next 5 months, Payu wanted to say.
Mrs. Sahani held Pinky tightly. She pushed her and walked towards Sunil and pulled his collar.
Sunil was in angry mood and his wife was screaming loudly. She had lost senses. Asha had put a medicine in her drink. The medicine gave her a kick and Asha's hypnotism worked. She fit words into Pinky's mouth that Sunil is a liar. He is cheating on her. Luckily Sunil had his dinner before Pinky started the Tamasha (Drama). Otherwise this drama was enough to kill his hunger pangs.
She called her friend Pihu, a slut. Sunil slapped Pinky in a crux of anger.
"You are a groundling. You married me for my money."Pinky screamed.
She collapsed immediately and Sunil lifted her up in his arms.
Sunil apologised for all the drama created by his wife. But half of the crowd enjoyed it. Sunil knew, all will talk about cooked up story of he having an extra marital affair. She called him a cheat and groundling and that pinched his heart. He could feel some cold stares and he walked out of the gate.
Payu was puzzled. Her mind stopped working. Rajat held her hands. Poonam and Pihu fought with her. Her mood was spoiled. She cried and Rajat hugged her tight. Suddenly there was a distraction. Rajath's mother announced...
"Ladies and Gentlemen. We are throwing a party tomorrow and all are invited. My son is taking up a job in London and I have fixed his engagement with Khurana's daughter Shilpa. I am sorry Rajat for not discussing with you but we want you to stop roaming with upper middle class girls and be serious. We are rich and we want you to marry according to our class. "
While the announcement was being made Payu stood clueless. Both their hands separated with the heart breaking engagement news. Her heart pierced and she could feel it breaking from inside. She slightly pushed him and ran to the bar. She had whiskey and beer. Nobody was there to take care of her. Rajat was busy with his mom. He was shocked and his eyes searched for Payu. She was nowhere.
She reached her home and there was darkness. She rang the doorbell. Nobody opened the door.
She yelled :
"Is everyone dead inside?"
She kicked on the door. Still no one opened and she slept in cold rainy climate on the porch.
She did not remember. The key must be there below the welcome porch or flower pot in the garden. They had a secret place.
Sunil came home in the midnight. He had taken Pinky to Dr Bajaj 's clinic and dropped her to her Mummy's home. He told everything to his mother in law and she apologised to Sunil on behalf of her daughter.
Seeing his daughter Payu, lying on the porch, he was sad😔
Her top was haywire. He could see her belly button. Her skirt was exposing her undergarments. He shook her hard. He was puzzled 😕
He got the smell of the alcohol around. He knew she was drunk and she was just 15. He lifted her slowly and adjusted her dress. He put her on her bed and silently removed her shoes. He once again became restless if something bad happened with her. He went to his room and he was red with anger.
He took his mobile to chat with Ravi. He was perspiring checking his Whatsapp message.
Asha had sent Payu's stripped photographs in different angles from an anonymous number. She blackmailed him through a voice message that she will make it viral if he won't transfer 75 lakhs to her account,tomorrow early in the morning.
Sunil was unable to trace that number yet he had her SMS and voice message. He had a feeling it was Asha and he forwarded everything to his friend inspector Ravi to investigate further. He was angry 😡 with Pinky. He was lost in his thoughts. If it is Asha, he had decided not to leave her this time. He can't bear anything against his darling daughter. He went to her room and found that she was feverish. He called up Dr Karthik to check if everything was OK with her.
Her heart beat was going slow and he suspected venom inside her. She was shifted to hospital for necessary check ups. Dr Bajaj extracted the small amount of poison from her. He told Sunil that she is out of danger and kept under observation for few more hours. His blood was boiling. He called up Rajat to check who gave her Alcohol.
Rajat confessed everything to Sunil and his willingness to marry Payu. But he was not in a mood to listen to Rajat. He hung up.
Payu was sleeping peacefully in her hospital dress. He just wanted to kiss her forehead and caress them.
He wanted to apologise for not being with her and leaving her with her friends, irresponsibly.
Dr. Karthik was reading her pulse rate and he slowly kissed her forehead. That put a smile on Papa's face. He knew Karthik loved Payu.
It was almost morning and Payu had made little murmurs. She was not conscious fully yet she was shifted to Dr Bajaj's home for a family feel. Sunil thanked Dr Bajaj, his duplicate with white hair for being a good friend and family doctor. Saving his daughter from danger.
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