This is the rewritten version of Outsiders that completely sucked the first time. Some characters have been completely removed from the story or given a different name and some have been added. If you've read the crappy old version, then you'll probably guess who's been added and who's been taken out or name changed. These characters are based off real people I talk to, so I'm not sorry if I didn't bother to change their name. If you have a problem with that, come at me.
This version will start in the past, instead of switching back and forth, some of you found it confusing. This version is also going to stay in one point of view, instead of going from one character to another. Sometimes I got confused on who was telling their side of the story and used the wrong pronouns for said character.
The next is going to be the first chapter. I already have chapters 1, 2, and 3 completed, I'm just going through them thoroughly to make sure I didn't mess up or make any mistakes. The last version of this book, I was lazy with it. I'm gonna be lazy with this one too, but I plan on not making it so bad. If you've read the first version, you'll know what I mean.
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Outsiders
General FictionJust a story about a half breed and her life struggles. This version is gonna be so dramatic and have so many love triangles, so be warned and don't get mad when the characters don't choose the person you want them to end up with. I already have all...
