Ok so I been wanting to post this story onto this site but I only have two chapters done so far and I'm not that great at grammar especially at writing stories so I was wondering if anyone could help me out if so than private message me please thanks...
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! Fallen Love !
Chapter 1:
I was waking up from the night before, I'm 14 years old. I live at an orphanage that I grew up in, I lost both my parents when I was just a baby. They both died in a car accident, I was in the backseat when it happened, all that I was left with was scars from the accident that almost killed me but all the scars I got from the accident healed very quickly and no one knew what I was or why my scars had healed. I have long pretty blonde hair, as well as blue eyes like my dad had. I have my moms personality which makes me a caring, loving, and respectful person towards other people.
"Emily time to get up" I heard the bitch Sarah say. Oops should I say the person in charge of the orphanage. "You've got to help me with the younger ones" I opened one eye, being the oldest was tough where I live "Okay coming, damn it" with my one good eye Sarah glared at me "No cursing!"
I soon opened both eyes. I sat up quickly after that when Sarah got a vase of of ice cold water ready to drench me and my mattress
"Get your uniform on now! I need help!" I nodded and stood up the cold concrete floor made me shiver; Sarah walked out and I shut the door
"I'll be in my office for your assignments!" I groaned but clumsily tried reaching for my hairbrush but got a face full of ice cold water "Emily stop messing about!" I groaned more and crawled to my wardrobe, wet and cold.
After I got my uniform on I checked myself in the mirror. My maids outfit was blue and white, like the nurses outfit's you'd see in the fifties, my hair had now dried and was up in a ponytail. The bitch hated long hair but made an agreement with me. My shoes I'm wearing clomped on the concrete as I walked toward Sarah's office and knocked on the door. Sarah shoved paperwork in my hand and left me in the corridor. I slowly walked to the other bedrooms and woke everybody up but Jade; I opened Jade's door and shook her gently awake, she was the youngest and most prettiest, but the little shape woke up slowly and sat up
"Hello Emily!" I smiled then heard a creak in the ceiling but ignored it.
I put water on a cloth and scrunched it out until the cloth was damp than wiped it on Jade's pale skin, her auburn hair glowed orange in the light. Then I heard it again, that creak I didn't know what it was, then the whole room started shaking and the rubble from the ceiling was spraying it's dusty substances on me and Jade
"Emily what's happening!?!" Jade shouted petrified... the last thing I saw was the room's floor above us open up like a door and collapse on the both of us... than it all went black.
