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Gabriel passed through the gateway and entered a place, a city, a utopia you only see in your dreams, " Welcome to Eden", Gabriel said. It was a place of wonder, with birds she had never seen before, a fountain of milk and honey, literally. She saw people going about their way peacefully, everyone seemed to be in agreement with each other. "I know this is a lot to consume in a day, but I promise you everything will be okay, Mary". No one had called her that name in such a long time. There was a breeze of ease that blew over her and for a moment everything was fine.
Eighteen years later......
" Can I have some bread please", said a very mature male voice, a very muscular , exceptionally handsome young man with two weird humps at his back. He had really grown over the years and had matured quickly. " Raziel", his mother called from behind him. She was now in her late forties, but still attractive, not a day goes by that Mary doesn't remember how they got to this place. " I got whatcha ordered" said Raziel. " Hello Mary", a familiar voice said behind them. " Hi Gabriel,"she said. They walked and talked about anything that came to their minds. " I have to go, duty calls" and with that Gabriel was gone so fast that they didn't even see his shadow. As he passed through the barrier, there was something or someone lurking through the shadows, with a beautiful pair of white wings. Who was that?
Meanwhile, back in Eden, Raziel and Mary were minding their own business when Mary said," I have to catch up with something don't go to far", with that she was gone. As he waited he grew bored decided to go on a tour of his home, it was like this was the first time, he was marveled at how peaceful the atmosphere was but something told  him it was right, maybe too right! As he strolled the paved streets of Eden, he noticed something weird, maybe too weird, a crack in the sky! "What the hell", he said. As he neared it he began to here certain noises at its origination point.
"This is new", he said. As he neared he noticed a stick, a very weak looking stick was the cause of this "crack". Then heard something

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