The Unforgettable Experience

A coma

I stayed in bed all night. The only sounds there were was the cars driving by and me crying. It hurt so much to know what happened to him i can't believe what happened. I got up and took a 15 min shower. I put my wet hair in a braid and i put on a dress and some sandals. I got my phone and car keys and headed over to Brook hospital (Not real). When i got there i ask what room number he was in and walled there. I knocked oh his door and walked in I saw his body laying there and i just started crying. He looked like he was sleeping so i just took a seat.

There was a knock on the door then the doctor walked in.

"Hi Ms.Valentine I'm doctor Reid ( lol only because i love criminal minds) i have some good news and some bad news" he said while shutting the door. I got scared because i can't take bad news.

"Well I'm going to start with the good news. The good news is that he didn't lose more blood then we thought."

"But the bad news is that he's in a coma and we can not be sure that he will wake up. I'm sorry to tell u think but we give him 4 months then we will perform surgery it's a 50/50 percent chance he'll make it out alive."

I started screaming and cry but then some beeping sound scared me.

"Don't worry is just letting us know that he is responding" he said. He walked out of the room and i sat there.

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3 Months later

I walked into the hospital with flowers in my hand smiling. Today like everyday i came and check on him. As i was waking i heard someone ask for the room number 654 which was Jeremy's room number i walked up to her and tapped on her shoulder.

"Hi I'm going to go visit him right now if want to come with me you can"

"Thank you and my names Ana what's yours." She was tall she had long blond hair with sea blue eyes and was a nice Carmel skin colour. She was really pretty i wonder if she's was related to him.

"Mia" I says politely and began walking to him room. I walked in and i saw him laying in bed. He looked so pale it hurts to look at him. I place the flowers down and then i sat in a chair. I turned my head and saw Ana standing there i got so scared because i forgot she was there.

"Oh I'm sorry you can talk to him if you want" I said and she nodded and stood above him.

"Hey Jer its Ana (beeeeeping) I love you and I'm sorry (Beeeeeeeeeeeeeping) i know what i did was wrong and I'm sorry i never meant for things to get so far out of hand (beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeping) will you take me back?"

I was so shocked because the monitor never beeped that much. I ran and got the doctor and explain what had happend and what was still happening. When i walked into the room doctor Reid told me that he wasn't fully awaken and that we needed to making his monitor beep.

"I'll sing to him" i blurted out.

"Okay well I'll give you some privacy" Reid said.

I'm going to sing a song by Sam Smith but which one.

I guess it true I'm not good at one night stand

But i still need love cause I'm just a man

These nights never seem to go to plan

I don't want you to leave

Will you hold my hand

Ohh won't you stay with me

Cause your all i need

This ain't love it's clear to see

But darling stay with me

Why an I so emotional

No it's not a good look

Gain some self control

Deep down I know this never works

But you could lay with me

So it doesn't hurt

Oh won't you stay with me

Cause you're all I need

This ain't love it's clear to see

But darling stay with me

Oooh oh ooh

Oooh oooh oh

Oooh oh ooh

Oooh ooooh oh

Oh won't you stay with me

Cause you're all I need

This ain't love it's clear to see

But darling

STAY WITH ME.

Once I finished the song i noticed i had tears on my cheek. I looked up and saw Jeremy still in a coma.

"Can i try" i turned and saw Ana standing above me. I'm staring to think it's because of her he was responding so much. What if he likes her what if they were a think.

"Yah but how do you know him"I asked?

"He's my boyfriend" My heart fell to the empty pit of my chest. I felt like I've been hit in the face with a truck. It hurt so badly knowing he had a girlfriend.

"Oh yea sure go ahead" i whispered and stood up so she could sit. She stared sing A thousand years she sounded like an angle.

BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP. I looked at Jeremy and saw his eyes had opened. When he looked at Ana his eyes were sparkling like he was getting a trillion dollars. When he looked at me he had a normal shade in his eyes. I walked over and hugged him.

"Bye Jer take care". I ran out of his room and slide down against the wall and cried. I got up and pat my back pocket then i noticed that my phone was on the desk in his room. I walked into the room and saw Ana and Jeremy having a full blast make out session.

"Sorry i left my phone" i said while sniffing. I walked over to the desk and grabbed my phone i walked out the door. When i got in my car i drove home. When i got home i checked if we got any mail. I saw a mail from France.

Ms. Valentine I am proud to tell you that you have been accepted into are school we would like you to fly out buy the end of next week if you have any concerns fell free to contact me.

I was so sad and happy at the same time ugh a bittersweet moment. I'm going to call my parents to tell them that i made it tomorrow. I took the elevator up to my room because i really didn't have any strength to walk up the stairs. When i got to my room i took of my dress and sandals and put a gown on and fell into deep slumber.