Smudged Mirror (Finished)

Chapter 1:

Hi people this is my first written story.. so tell me what you think! No negative feedback though. Thank you and enjoy the story!!!

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Katie is driving home from a long day of work. She is tired, but she has to go home to her daughter, Maria. She better be in bed, Katie thought. Just as she was getting off the highway she received a call from her daughter's babysitter.

"Good evening Jordan how is my princess doing?" asked Katie.

"Um Kate, your daughter is in a hospital. She went into the bathroom and I heard her scream. When I went to check on her the bathroom door was locked. I yelled for her but there was no answer. When I finally opened it there was blood EVERYWHERE. I got her to the hospital as fast as I could."

"Oh my god! Where are you guys?"

"We're at the New Franklin Hospital."

"Okay I'm on my way there. Thank you so much Jordan." She hung up and sped off.

When she reached the hospital, she went around to the Emergency Services.

"What room is Maria Thomas's in?" she asked one of the nurses. 

"She's in room 802." Katie said thank you and rushed to see her daughter.

When she got in she could see just how bad Maria was. Her silky sun fired hair was now covered with blood, her leg is forced up into the air, and her whole body is filled with bruises and scratches. Katie's eyes are overflowing with tears as she went to touch her daughter. As soon as Katie's hand touched Maria, Maria jumped so high her leg let go of her leg holder and Maria let's out a horrifying scream. I'm so sorry, Maria. I should never let you be with Jordan again, she thinks.

"Maria can you talk?"

"Yes, mommy."

"Good baby, now tell me how this happened."

"Jordan and I were watching a movie and I told her I wanted to use the bathroom. I went into the bathroom and I seen hand prints on our mirror. I went to ask Jordan if she was the one who put smudges on the mirror." Katie is fully listening and even taking notes down trying to find a main idea. "I went to open the door but it was locked. I turned around in suspicion because I could feel that someone was standing behind me breathing on my neck. It was no one; Or I didn't see anyone until I got scratched. I screamed for Jordan but she couldn't get the door opened. Then I passed out... and I heard someone whisper in my ear, 'help me I'm desperate'."