Stage 2

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- yay, it's Sunday!

1. Tris was the last one in the room... right?

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2. yes Tris, you see you can't get through the mud, so you just keep trying to get through it until you trip... didn't you get a result for erudite? Because that wasn't very smart at all.

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3. Four's eyes student changed from black to the color they're supposed to be. same with his shirt... although those might be a result of the lighting of the room...

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4. a needle to the neck should hurt alot more than she reacted, unless she's been stuck before, and she shouldn't have because this was her first simulation...

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5. the nasty innuendos between four and Tris are even worse during this stage, I mean seriously!

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6. ok. I'm only gonna say this once. CAPTURE THE FLAG! THAT DIDNT NEED TO BE IN A PG-13 MOVIE IF THEY WEREN'T GOING TO USE PAINTBALLS! they don't need to be putting bullet wound sim darts in a movie for teens under 13. parents may be like: my kid is ten, so as long as I'm here, they can watch it. then they see the blood and the sim darts and are like: they lied to us. stick to the book for ONE thing! that's all we all!

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7. the zip line looked fun, right? :)

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8. again, things that were funny that nobody seemed to find funny:

-"oh, so you have someone to blame when you lose" *four smirks* "something like that"- 4& Eric on the train.

-"tell me if this hurts" "you tell me"*shots Peter* -Peter and Tris, capture the flag

-"take your time, I'm just enjoying myself in a shrinking box"-four to Tris in his fear sim.

-when Tris hits the box, everyone turns to her. I found that funny how everyone just looks at her in unison like that.

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9. YES TRIS! YOUR MOTHER WAS DAUNTLESS! THAT IS NOT THE POINT OF WHY SHE'S HERE SO STOP TRYING TO INTERRUPT HER! THIS IS IMPORTANT!!! also did anyone else see the guy watching them in the background completely disappear?(I know this is technically before stage 2, but still, am I wrong?)

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10. why is no one reacting to Tris in erudite?! again, that's something that should cause a war of the factions.

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11. I love erudite's part of the city! it looks amazing... but it looks similar to that place in "the giver" trailer, which you've seen from earlier, if I'm not mistaken.

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12. why is stage two so short?!

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13. FOUR! YOU KNOW SHE'S DIVERGENT, SHE KNOWS SHE'S DIVERGENT, DO YOU REALLY THINK SHE'D TELL YOU WHAT HER TEST RESULTS WERE? SHE DOESN'T KNOW YOU'RE DIVERGENT!

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14. Tris's eyes were green in the water tank, also she looks like she can't see.

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15. take your time Tris, I bet you're REALLY just enjoying yourself in a box you can't get out of filling with water!

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16. even in the book, why did she not think to stuff her jacket in the pipe to stop the water if, as four says, "fear wakes you up"? even if he didn't, fear is supposed to wake you up, and even then, didn't you get a result for erudite, because that wasn't very erudite if you ask me.

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17. yes Tris, palming and kicking the glass didn't work, so you decide to try TAPPING it and it works.

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18. NO AL! THE TEARS!

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19. what is with all this "think like a Dauntless" crap? last time I checked, you're aware during the Sims for the final test.

-if I missed something, don't hesitate to say so.

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⏰ Last updated: Sep 14, 2014 ⏰

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