Mary Sue test (CLOSED)

Sam Peyes

This is for urexpensiveboi

Sorry it's so late!!!! I did it now, though, I hope that's okay!

Name: Sam Peyes
Age: 14
+1 it's pretty common to have a high-schooler as a character
Gender: Boy
-1
Fandom: PJO and HoO
This is probably just a nitpick, but I see so many characters in this fandom. Then again, I'm part of the fandom, so...
Species: Demigod
+2 Where are my naiads? Dryads? Satyrs? Where are they I can't find any OCs that are!
Hair: Brown messy hair
-1 for using an actual hair color
Eyes: Brown
Skin tone: Bronze/white
How (+1 btw)
Wardrobe: Hoodie, jeans.
Colors? Anything in particular that gives a character the upper hand in combat, like Annabeth's hat?
Crush: A boy in the Apollo cabin
Aww
Likes: Food
HEH DONT WE ALL -1 FOR RELATABILITY
Dislikes: school, homophobic people
+2 I'm pretty sure nobody likes these
Backstory: Well Sams mum was a homophobic person which hurt him since he was gay and didn't want to break it to her.She tried to make him perfect even though he was far from it.She would shout at him for getting B's,and every night she would have a fight with him about stuff.One night she actually looks at his grades on his 14th birthday and she finds out how bad his grades are and shouts at him,Sam leaves the house in his fury.He then is found by his friend Anna,and she wants to show him a place to comfort him.She shows him a Clove Of woods.They get attacked by hellhounds.BLA.BLA.HE FINDS OUT ANNA IS A NYMPH AND HE IS A DEMIGOD...
+2 for the character running away
O: Son Of Hermes
-1 Yes!!! There are so few actual OCs that are children of Hermes and it makes me sad because he usually has a packed cabin, with his own kids too. This is great!

Final verdict: 4
Sentence: This character could always be better, but then again every character needs improvement. It just so happens that your character needs less improvement than most. Are you sure you didn't stumble onto the wrong quiz? It's for bad characters only, lol.