Mary Sue test (CLOSED)

Bandit

This is an OC that belongs to @Emo_Fangirl_576 I hope this doesn't turn out too bad.
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Name: Bandit
Interesting name, but what's the last name? Any middle name?
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Plus 10 points. Sorry. These are both very common.
Fandom: She just has a lot of fandoms. HP, PJO, HoO.
Okay I'm going to subtract three points because I like those books.
Species: Controls elements. (Elemental)
That doesn't answer my question. Since it didn't answer my question in a way that fits the fandoms, I need to add back those three points.
Hair color, hair style: Waist length, dark brown turning to blue.
Is this natural or dyed? (+1 point)
Eye color: Silver
+1
Skin color: Pale
Like emo pale, or like gothic pale, or like 'I'm Irish' pale? (No offense, I'm being honest. Sorry to any Irish friends out there.)
Wardrobe: 1. White long sleeve, grey jeans, black leather jacket.
Is the shirt a crop top? +1 point for the leather jacket. Lots of Angry Sue's have them.
2: MCR Hoodie, P!ATD shirt, black jeans, black Nike shoes, Hematite bracelet, treble clef necklace.
Band items. Hoodie+band shirt+jeans=Mary Sue. I'll only add 2 points though.
Crush: No one.
People crushing on them: No one.
-1 point
Likes: Music, drawing, chocolate, straw/blue/black/tayberries (what are tayberries) and animals.
Neutral. Likes and dislikes are either obvious or neutral. These are neutral. No + or -
Dislikes: Humanity, stuck ups, arrogant people, people hurting her friends
+3 you shouldn't really have to point out some of those. Just saying.
Backstory: Bandit's parents were murdered. She ran away.
+5
She came to the woods. Rescued by a satyr, she came to CHB where she was claimed by Apollo. That was when she was 10. She got her Hogwarts letter, went to Hogwarts, and was sorted into Hufflepuff.
-1 Not a griffindor. Good.
Now she's sixteen and is in her 6th year at Hogwarts.
Other: Has a pet wolf
+2
Is bisexual, favorite god/goddess is Artemis, that's about it.
Bisexual is actually pretty overused. +1
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Wow, this turned out. Um. Average? A lot of things could be improved.

Total points: 24
Sentence: Try again, bro. Sorry.

Well, other than that, I think you did more or less fine. A few things though. A pet wolf? Multiple fandoms? What on Gaia's earth is a tayberry?

Well, that's it from me. Bye!
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