Out of line

The grade that ruined it all

Oh God I thought as I awaited my teacher to hand me that test. I started to sweat and have a little panic attack cause I didn't study for it. But in all honestly I was so tired I work two jobs and I didn't have time. Jeremy is going to be so pissed I kept thinking but then I snapped out of my thinking when the teacher called my name "Ciara" Mr.corter said I go up and get my test which he had the common sense to fold...I slowly open it and see a 5 hoping it was a 95 but I was sadly mistaken it was a 55% oh geeze I won't be sitting for a whole week I can't believe I failed another test...."shit" why can't I get anything right???

Jeremy's POV

She took that test today and I hope she did well because if she didn't I am going to be really pissed but I can't focus on that right now I am at an adoption center. Christina and I would love another child because we realized that Ciara was almost grown up and we are seniors in college so why not begin life by getting another kid. I walk in with Christina. Goodness there's so many kids without parents. Then my eyes settle on this one little girl in the corner playing with a Barbie doll. Brown hair in messy pigtails...dirty pink dress Christina must've known what I was thinking because she grabbed my hand and we walked over to her "hi" I say to her in a very soft voice she answers "hello sir" I ask her what's her name and she says "Ashley" I melt when she says that she's 7 years old I already knew I wanted her so we took her home and signed a whole bunch of papers. Then I notice that Ciara kind of sneaks in. "Hey Ciara can you come here?"

Ciara's POV

Shit! They found out I say to myself...I walk in to see a little girl on the couch on Christina's lap..."who and what is that?" I ask kind of rudely but you know I have to be the only child because I need to be the center of attention..."it's your new sister" says Jeremy "okay..." That's really all I could say since I was trying to avoid the test talk...I walk out of the room

Jeremy POV

something is up and I can feel it...I go to the computer to check her grades...my face flushes with anger

Science- 67%

Math-68%

English- 71%

History- 69%

Oh she's in so much trouble but I need to cool down first...I can't spank her when I am angry...I print off her grades wait 10 minutes then go upstairs...I knock on the door she says "come in" I walk in.

Ciara POV

I'm dead...he found out...I can see the grades in his hand...before I knew it I was being lectured then "apparently" (a/n that's said with sarcasm) I wasn't listening to him so the next thing I remember is looking at my wall to looking at my white carpet...I start squirming "NO JEREMY NO!" I am trying so hard to get out of his grip but he's to strong! The first SMACK came down I jump at the shock of it...then he starts to lecture I SMACK TOLD YOU TO SMACK SMACK SMACK GET BETTER GRADES AND NOT FAIL SMACK SMACK SMACK it doesn't really hurt now because I'm still wearing my jeans and underwear but that's all about to change when I am rudely pulled up and pants and underwear come back down. I try to back away but he grabs my arm and yanks me over his lap again now that's when his smacks hurt he kept saying stuff to me about getting good grades but I was more focused on the fact that my backside was burning and I wasn't paying attention

SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK by now I am sobbing because I can't take the pain

Jeremy's POV

I knew it was time to stop soon because all her pleading stopped and she just laid limp over my lap so I delivered the last ten swats to her sit spot just to make them as red as her bottom. I rubbed her back for awhile and we cuddled. She fell asleep in my arms so I tucked her into bed and left the room...she's so cute when she sleeps I turn off the light and go downstairs to hang out with Christina and Ashely.

The end

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Thoughts??? I'm not good at these things this is my first book...can someone help me?