Ocean was only at CHB for a day, but was immediately loved by everyone there! She came across many friends.
"Hey there!" she said to a blonde silver eyed teenager. "What's your name, hunk?"
"I'm Silver, the son of Artemis," he replied (yep, Artemis can have kids now). "And you're are so beautiful and awesome! Obviously, you are the main protagonist!"
"And I am Trinity," said a goth girl. "Daughter of Hades. Death, death, death, sorrow, misery, death..."
"And I'm Kyle..."mumbled a shy boy with brown hair. "I'm the son of Iris."
"A minor god! LAME!"Ocean laughed. "See ya, wouldn't want to be ya!" Then she magically zipped away.
She fought in the training grounds, and was better than everyone there! She was even better than Percy!
"Wow, I defeated gods and giants, and survived Tartarus, and you beat me on your first day!" Percy exclaimed in amazement. "You must be the greatest demigod ever!"
Everyone praised her, then suddenly Rachel came down in a jetpack. "I gots a PROPHECY! Listen up, b*tches!" Her glowed green and she started the prophecy:
The Dark child will seek revenge
But don't worry! The Ocean will defeat him!
And she'll be the greatest hero to ever live
And something, something, something...
I'm done!
Then Rachel disappeared, and will be MIA for the rest of the book.
"Oh my gods!" Ocean gasped. "What does it mean!?"
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Does this really need explaining?
OK, first, the side characters: Silver shouldn't exist, Artemis is a maiden goddess. Trinity is cliché, not all Hades children have to be gloomy and have a spooky name, Bianca wasn't like that, and Nico wasn't born emo. As for Kyle, he's cool.
Ocean can't magical be good at fighting, and she certainly wouldn't be able to defeat Percy at her first try. The dude is a powerful demigod, and shouldn't be defeated so easily!
The prophecy doesn't rhyme. And it literally tells you EVERYTHING that's going to happen, there's no mystery.
Rachel is never seen or heard of again.
