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This is what I got of chapter 1 of Worlds Collide so far. If you have any opinions, please make it kind advice. No hate. If I need to change anything, tell me.

A patrol of autobots were driving through the vast desert wasteland. Among the patrol was Prowl, Sideswipe, Sunstreaker, Bluestreak, and Cliffjumper. There had been a Energon spike in a near by forest. It was still unknown if there were any cydertronians, dead or alive. But it was better then leaving it uncheck.

Prowl sweared under his breath as he heard Sunstreaker's annoying ranting that this was a waste of his "important" time. Prowl was about to reach his last straw but contained his anger. Bluestreak could feel the anger burning off if the second in command.

"I bet this 'energon' signal is just some power plant or something." Sunstreaker complained.

Prowl can tell the yellow twin was just trying to make up excuses.

Sideswipe attempted to see the bright side. "Hey bro. If Starscream and his bros are there, we could jet judo, can't we~?"

Prowl knew that last part was directed towards. Cliffjumper groaned. "Please say yes."

Prowl sighed. "Yes you two can do jet judo."

For the rest of the drive, Sunstreaker remained quiet.

I say I have a lot more to work on. 

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