Hello and thank you for reading my story so far! I have a few things I want to say, so sorry in advance for interrupting the story.
First off, this is my first story. So it would be greatly appreciated if you didn't focus on my writing skills, which I'm sure is not very good.
Secondly, I would love to hear your guys opinions on how to improve my writing and what you thought of the story. We writers do live for feed back. So please do not hesitate to comment on my story. I would Also like for you guys to vote on my story. It really helps me know that I'm doing a good job.
And finally, I hope you guys are okay with how long it takes me to write this. I sadly do have other things to do and can't always focus on writing this story. I also suffer from major writers block most of the time.
Again thank you for reading this story. I hope you continue to read it! Please have an amazing day!
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Legend of Jaluga
FantasyAdeline has grown up knowing one thing. Her people are slaves. And when she asks to save them she always receives the same answer. No. But when her uncle and best friend are taken by the Badure, she throws caution to the wind. She searches endlessly...
