Um..idk it was okay to dramtic to soon.iam pretty sure ash wont punch Luke in the face for something so stupid and you made "Taylor"kinda of a whore. Dont get me wrong its good but tone down the dramticness :) .Sorry for the honest lol i just care about you
<3 I would say tone down the drama intell like you get more into the story
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