luke_over_here
Okay so this plot is very good and i cant wait for her to write more.She knows her mistakes and what needs to be fixed.Iam gonna say all thats is really need is like nicely set up diologue.<3I say read this its very good.She has very good writing.Its not fully done so add it to your. library and wait for updates.Another suggestion is make the chapters abit longer.
<3xx kassidy
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