Saving Marley

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Saving Marley by xFakingaSmilex

Description:
Death is calm, death is peaceful.

Well, death would be those two things if you didn't accidentally die at school. He probably didn't mean to, what sane person sets out to kill someone at school?

Marley is bright, funny and pretty, but all of those things isn't your 'get out of death free card'. Because she suddenly finds herself as a ghost and only the bad boy can see her - which means she'll have to trust him to help her find out if she really is dead or not, and a way to make everything peachy on earth before she comes to grip about giving up her family to be oficially six feet under the ground.

Opinion:
I think that the idea was very interesting, I'm not saying it hasn't been used before but I liked the story and the characters.

One of the few things I didn't like about it though was the way Trent suddenly fell in love with Marley, it felt to forced there weren't moments where he felt nervous or anything like that towards her.

I felt like there was more reason towards Marley's brother liking Trent than him liking her.

I like that the ending was believable and that they fell for each other again.

Rating:
I give it a 8 out of 10

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