Can I ask you a question? Actually... This is more of a proposition. Should I re-write every chapter to be longer (and therefore better)?
What I'm saying is, the story would be the same, but with more description and action. I would re-write this in another book, and this would be quick-read version. (Kind of like that nook book thingy with the shortened books)
So this book would almost be like an optional preview of the upcoming chapter, in the longer, (hopefully) better book
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