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While driving home Corbyn kept looking out the window. He kept seeing Zach- but why?

He was now looking at the mist in the mountains.
He sees something- well saw something

But he ignored it.

Again

But this time it was a human figure.

And again. But this time he saw a shine on his finger. The ring.

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Corbyn and daniel get out the car and rushed inside.

They couldn't wait. First thing Corbyn did was run straight to the bathroom and took the test.

"All we gotta do now is wait"
Daniel said running his hands through his blonde hair

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Five minutes pass and Daniel eagerly
Runs to the test.

Shaking, he picks it up. Not knowing what he was about to see next.

Tears.
Not tears of joy. Nor sadness.

Tears of confusion

How could this be?

He drops the test into the waste bin.

There it sits. A negative pregnancy test, and other useless things that they will never need again.

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Okay so

Should I continue writing like this or do POVs?

And should I keep the style like this or should I do like an actual looking page of a book?

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