Creepypasta OC reviews 💕(Discontinued)

OC #1: Fern Koru

Hello my little stars!!!
The first OC I'm going to review was made by the wonderful -----Fiona----- !!!
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Full name: Fern Koru
That's a really unique name!!! It fits your character really well, too.
Age: 19
Good age, most creepypasta OCs  I've heard of have been around 13-16 years old. It's good to see some variety!
Gender: Female
Cool.
Pronouns: She/Her
Nice.
Species: Human eeveelution
Ooh, an original species! Most creepypasta OCs are either demons, ghosts, or nekos of some sort.
Also, Eevee's a favorite of mine owo
Race: Pale:
Cool.
D.O.B.: Unknown
Is it unknown as in you aren't sure, or is it unknown as in no one knows? Just wondering (°▽°)
Status: Alive
Good.
Abilities: Just like the Pokémon Leafeon, she can use the same moves.
Neat! It's really cool seeing a Creepypasta/Pokémon hybrid!
Appearance: Human Leafeon. She looks really tall and scary, but, she is actually kind once you get to know her.
Interesting personality!
Past appearance: A human eevee. She was small and shy.
Awwwwwwww-
Weight: Skinny but not too skinny.
Good! Would it be possible to make a specific weight though?
Height: Not too tall but not too short.
Good! Again, Maybe a certain height would help me picture it a bit better owo
Features that stand out: Her hair. Part of it is actually leaves and plants but it is also real hair.
That's really cool!!! I like how original it is. Most creepypasta OCs I see have normal hair with dyed tips.
Relationships: Flame, her boyfriend.
Cool!!! I'm guessing Flame is another OC of yours. I'm glad you aren't dating Jeff the Killer or something, xD ((I'm not really against that, it's just a tad bit overused... Sorry if I offend anyone ;-; ))
Parents: She didn't know them but she had a mom and dad.
Nice. Maybe add some more information, as to why she didn't know them?
Friends: Luna and Ticci Toby.
Interesting. Does she have any other relationships with the other pastas?
Backstory: Her nana died because of these two brats. She killed the brats.
Who are these brats? How did she find Toby? How did she become a creepypasta? I'm sorry if I sound too harsh >~< I don't mean to be...
Personality: Is kind but depressed.
Good personality. Maybe add a bit more detail?
Phobias: Spiders and Death.
Same thoughhhh. Anyway, Good phobias!!! owo, they don't clash with her personality, unlike usual CP OCs.
Mental illnesses: Might have ADHD.
Interesting.
Likes: Sweets and kind people
Good.
Dislikes: Mean people and insects.
Same.

Rating: 9-10
Reason for rating: Your OC is very original!!! I loved reading about it! The only thing I would fix is maybe be more specific about certain things, such as her backstory. Overall it's a really great OC!!! uwu

Extra: It was a tad bit hard to tell that it was a creepypasta. I mean, if you didn't add the fact that she was friends with Toby, she could probably even be her own OC. So, I would recommend working on her backstory a bit. -w-

Anyway, this was my first review everyone!!! I hope you enjoyed. Sorry if I offended you, if I was too harsh, or if I was too soft, I tried...
Comment on the first chapter if you would like to have me review your OC!!!
Bye my little stars!!!
-Bleu💙