Creepypasta OC reviews 💕(Discontinued)

OC #3: Angela Knutson (Chase)

Hello stars!!! Today I'm going to be reviewing an OC for BoopSnoots !!!

Name: Angela Knutson
That's a really good name!
Pasta name: Chase
Interesting.
Age: 15
Nice. I'm so glad it's not 13.
Gender: Female
Pronouns: She, her
Nothing wrong here!
Species: human
Good. I'm relieved to hear it isn't a neko.
Race: White
Nice.
D.O.B.: 07/05/2006
Cool.
Status: alive
Good, owo
Weapon: a h**kin' chainsaw
xD, I'm glad her weapon's original.
Skills: pretty smart, very fast hence the name, surprisingly quiet when she runs but not silent
Great abilities!!!
Past appearance: Hamilton hoodie, sneakers, and jeans.
(Hamilton!!!) I like how you made the outfit casual. uwu
Appearance: Height- 'bout 5'3.
Good height!
Weight- 130
(I'm guessing lbs?)
skin color: very pale, white.
Nice.
Hair color- blonde, shaved off on the right side and floof on the left
Interesting hair style!!!
Eye color-brown
Nice.
Features- Dark circles under her eyes, cat like eyes.
Nice features!!!
Clothing- a light brown hoodie (always keeps hood on) with dark blue-ish sweatshorts no shoes.
Nice! owo
accessories- light grey bandanna (kind of) with a twisted sharp toothed smile
Interesting! So kind of like Toby's?
Parents: both Tammy and Mike Knutson are alive, and she has a good relationship with both of them, but Meghan is more like a sister to her.
Nice!!! And great names!
Backstory: well...she was living a pretty good life, until one of her friends asked to stay at her house because the friend's parents were murdered. (yayyyyy...dear god) after about a month or so something in her friend snapped, and they bit her girlfriend  (the friend's girlfriend) and then ran into a mysterious forest. Angela was determined to find her friend. (since she doesn't have many) A little too determined she had started to spiral into madness, and she kept hearing voices saying it was her fault. She finally found the forest, but there are two sides of the forest and she ends up on the wrong side and gets captured by Zalgo and gets turned into Zalgo's proxy. (Kind of)
Wow!! Really good and original backstory!!! I usually see OCs that become a pasta/proxy for Slender, and there aren't that many for Zalgo, so good job!
Phobias: always been afraid of the smallest spiders, losing her friends. (New and old)
Nice phobias.
Weakness: would 100% give her life for her true friends, trusts people too easily.
Great weaknesses!!!
Health: borderline personality disorder, insomnia, ADHD, lucid dreams a lot, and I guess really bad nightmares?
I'm not sure if those last two would relate to health/mental disorders.
Great mix of disorders though! It's realistic and it makes sense.
Likes: friends, family, and bagels...just...bagels...
(XD)
Dislikes: Spiders, bugs, no WiFi (SAME) and getting hurt (she's a big wimp about it.
Nice balance of likes and dislikes!
Catchphrase: ironically..."I love a good chase." *quiet evil laughter*
Really cool catchphrase!!!

And the rating...

Rating: 10/10!!!
Reason for rating: This OC was really orginal and creative!!! It has a  relatable personality, and it was a joy to read about!!! There's not anything you need to fix!

Thanks BoopSnoots for letting me review her OC!!!
Sorry if I was a bit harsh at some points, or if my review was off in any way.
Let me know if you would like a new one, or if you would like it taken down, I completely understand if you do.
Bye my little stars!!!
-Bleu💙