Creepypasta OC reviews 💕(Discontinued)

OC #2: Flame Torch

Hello stars!!! 🌟
Today I'm going to be reviewing another OC made by the wonderful -----Fiona----- !
She's the only one that's been keeping this book going so far, so huge thanks to her!!!

Full Name: Flame Torch
Creative name!
Age: 19
Good! I'm glad you choose to make your OCs ages out of the usual range.
Gender: Male
Pronouns: He/Him
Nothing wrong here!
Race: Pale
Could you possibly be more specific on what race he is?
Status: Alive
Good,
Abilities: Just like a normal Flareon, he can do the same moves as that Pokémon.
Ooh!!! An OC similar to Fern! That's interesting.
Appearance: Seems like a normal 19 year old boy but also looks like a flareon. He is pretty tall and his hair is pretty out there.
I can already imagine what he looks like! owo
Past Appearance: Before he evolved into a Flareon, he was a normal Eevee. All human Eeveelutions started out as an Eevee.
That's good to know. uwu
Current appearance: A Human Flareon. His outfit is a casual hoodie that is orange and red with denim jeans and black sneakers.
Cool look!!!
Weight: About the normal weight for a 19 year old male.
That's good,
Height: 5'7???
It seems like you're a bit unsure. Usually, men around 19 years old are about 5'7-5'9, but it varies for everyone. So great height!
Features that stand out: His hair. His hair is not normal at all. His hair is literally flames and he is actually immune to fire, so, he can't be burned.
I would add that last part in the abilities section. owo
That's really, really interesting though!
Relationships: He has been in a relationship before with a girl for 1 year. They broke up after he found she was cheating on him. He is now dating Fern.
Awww, Fern and him would make a cute couple!!! And usually the guys cheat on girls in most OC's backstories. It gets pretty cliche after a while.
Parents: Mother is a Vaporeon. Father is a Flareon.
Interesting. Names maybe?
Friends: Luna and Toby.
Aw, nice! Just like Fern!!! I'm guessing Luna's a Creepypasta OC too?
Crushes: Before he was dating Fern, he had a crush on her.
Aww
Rivals: He kind of hated BEN, now they are kinda like a pair of annoying brothers.
I can imagine it really clearly lol.
Other: He cares a lot about people and he sometimes hesitates on killing people.
Good, By other I meant any other relationships, but this works too!
Detailed Backstory: After his parents found out he was a weak Flareon, they threw him out into the streets. That was where his ex girlfriend helped him until the break up.
Interesting backstory!!!
Phobias: Death, Spiders, and seeing Fern die.
I believe you used the first two on Fern already. People can have the same phobias, but after a while, when they're repetitive, it gets kind of unoriginal... Again, sorry if I'm too harsh... >~< ((BTW, I'm not saying Flame is unoriginal, cause he's truly an original OC, but I'm just saying I wouldn't use the same phobias on all of your OCs...))
Personality: Little bit of a tsundere but is very kind. Kind of a hot head though.
Great personality!!! I can imagine it clearly!!! :3
((I wonder if that last part was an intended pun...))
Likes: Video games
Cool! Just like BEN! owo
Dislikes: Mean people.
Same!!!

And now for the Rating.........

Rating: 10/10!!!
Reason for rating: Wow!!! You're really good at making original OCs!!! I loved reading about this one also, and I can really picture his personality and everything really well!!! It was a wonderful OC 💕 uwu

Thanks -----Fiona----- for allowing me to review one of her wonderful OCs again!!!
Sorry if I was a bit harsh at some points, or if my review was off in any way
Let me know if you would like a new one, or if you would like it taken down, I completely understand if you do.
Bye my little stars!!!
-Bleu💙