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name:
what do you like: I dunno
what do you dislike: eh...
how old are you: 11
your hobbies: I don't have any
do you like me: I dont even know you
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then Logan  took Jack's notebook away from Avery she looked at him annoyed "he's such a jerk" she thought
but decided to ignore him.
Jack wanted everyone in class answer              questions in his notebook.
it's a Good idea to quickly get to know people around you.
Janitor walked in Logan fastly got his notebook back.
he said that their teacher is sick
and because it's their last lesson.
everyone fastly left the  classroom and left school as fast as they can.

Avery was just slowly leaving school
all alone.
Noone liked her because her family  is very poor.
after walking out of school she turned right not like everyone turning left.
it's because she's living on a poor street.
street smells bad and alot of people are homeless there.
it's called dangerous but Avery wasn't afraid of it because she's living there whole life.
only this time she was feeling
like something is different.
then she noticed someone new.
weird creepy old man with dirty brown  Coat was walking in her Direction.
she kept walking but now a little faster.
old man stopped her saying "hey little girl"
avery was a very scared she just wanted to leave
"Im sorry but I dont have time" Avery answered
old man said
"oh come on i just wanted to talk"
Avery didn't trusted him
she panicked and started to run away from him.
she ran on a road
and....

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BREAKING NEWS:
11 years old girl Avery found dead on Blacksmith street
hit by a car
Driver Says that she ran into the road like crazy and that it looked like she was running away from someone or something . police is still looking for a Reason of her Behavior
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