Art Book 2

Pokémon AU sketch + update

I haven't worked on any stories here for the longest, so with my Pokémon AU project update, I'll keep it brief as possible. Plus I have a question to the people who like my Pokémon AU story.

Should I continue TOSOP's (abbreviated name for my Pokémon AU story)  story as a novel? I read through it's only two chapters and it was kinda painful for me. I started it somewhere back in the eighth grade and you can obviously tell that I was writing and thinking of stuff on the spot as I go. I had key points and ideas of important events, but didn't know how to fill in the blanks (if that makes any sense).

I'm glad that at least seven people voted one it and two people said they were loving it in a comment (thanks @nobodylivesanymore and HyperCartoonFan20 ), but I'm just not happy with it. The pacing is crap, the description is crap, the designs for the characters are crap, and it's obviously not thought out completely. It's easily comparable to "Chlorine Grown Roses" or "Blood Raining Night and I hate it.

I feel like TOSOP would be better off as a comic, because I have scenes in mind that'll be better depicted that way than in words. And I'll actually write down the story arc and properly flush out the characters in their opposite counterpart (because they obviously aren't in the story I wrote back in middle school and you can tell that I didn't know what I was doing back then).

I'm even working on character designs (which are just sketches at the moment). And I want to work on alternate versions of the episodes "A Rush of Ninja Wisdom", "A Stealthy Challenge", "The Legend of the Ninja Hero", and "A Festival of Descisions" before I present the story of TOSOP.

I'm hoping this fan project of mine turns out to be decent in the end, and therefore be a guide for me with original works in the future!