Chapter 1: The New Dimension

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It had been a normal day. Alphys and Undyne watching anime, Papyrus yelling at Sans, Asgore trying to convince Toriel to start communicating with him again, Flowey and Chara hanging out and Mettaton and Napstablook spending some time together. Frisk, however, was sitting in her room, writing in the new diary Toriel had given her. It was a cute little diary with a yellow cover. She opened it and thought of what to write.

/\/\/\/\ Frisk's POV /\/\/\/\

I pondered on what to write. I summoned my soul out and took a look at it. It was a gleaming red.
Determination.
I got out of my chair and touched one of those save stars.

The feeling of being able to write down your feelings,
Fills you with determination.

I sighed and pulled my soul back in as I slumped back down on my chair. I looked out the window and saw Grillby's just across the road from here. It was closing up. I saw Grillby close the door behind him as he walked over to my house. He had promised to come over with a guest that was... well, quite weird. He said their name began with a 'T'. I picked up my pen and began to sketch a heart. I took my red pen out and coloured it in. Underneath, I wrote 'Determination.' I then proceeded to draw six other hearts, each in different colours with different words beneath them in a circle.

A light blue one.
Patience.

An orange one.
Bravery.

A purple one.
Perseverance.

A green one.
Kindness.

A blue one.
Integrity.

A yellow one.
Justice.

In the middle, I wrote, 'The Seven Souls.' I closed my diary and went to the living room. A nice smell entered my nostrils. I saw Alphys and Undyne on the new couch watching something. It was Mew Mew Kissy Cutie - The Mewvie. I smiled at this and entered the kitchen. Toriel smiled when she saw me as I ran into her arms. They were warm, and smelled of pie.

"Hello, my child, how was your day so far?" She asked me.

"I had a great day! Paps and Sans took me out to the cinema, and then we went to an amazing restaurant!" I signed.

"Good to hear! As you know, Grillby is coming with that guest. Are you excited?" Toriel asked me. I nodded as the front door opened and a feminine voice was heard.

"Hello, everyone!" The voice said. Muffet entered the room.

"Hello, Muffet! How's your bakery doing?" Asgore asked.

"I'm doing great! All my friends are so into it! And it's all thanks to you guys that I'm here," Muffet smiled. Chara ran downstairs into the kitchen, Flowey wrapped around her arm. "Oh, hello Chara dear! It's been a while hasn't it?" Muffet smiled.

"Heya," Chara replied, staring at someone on the screen being shot off into he sky by a rocket. Flowey unwrapped himself from Chara and picked up a game controller and began to play some sort of anime killing game. The doorbell rung. I raced off to answer the door. Toriel giggled as she went back to her cooking. I opened the door to see Grillby waiting.

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