"Adrian?"Jia Hyson blearily opens his eyes. His head throbs painfully as his mouth tastes dry and disgusting. With an unwilling heart, he forces himself to sit up and rub his eyes in an attempt to wipe the grogginess from it. "Mblergh?"
Suddenly he's shoved back down as a soft body tackles him in a fierce hug. Jia Hyson wants to vomit as his head cruelly hits the hard arm of a particularly worn out couch.
"Madeline," A deeper voice chides, "you're going to end up finishing him off at this rate."
"Ah!" Mercifully the young girl releases Jia Hyson from her embrace, "Sorry! Sorry! Adrian, are you okay? I'll go make something for you, what do you want?"
Without even thinking Jia Hyson croakily answers, "Cheeseburger."
Jia Hyson pauses for a moment. A little confused where this sudden craving cake from but the two people in the room just laughs. "Well if Adrian still wants a burger then he's fine." The male voice teases.
He can feel his cheek being patted before the giggling young female finally gets off of him. "Don't worry, I'll make you the bestest cheeseburger ever!" She declares proudly before the sound of light running leaves the room.
Blearily Jia Hyson tries to get up a second time, fueled by a strange feeling of anxiety and foreboding. This time however, a large warm hand gently pressing against his chest stops him. "Don't get up," The deeper voice murmurs, "you collapsed from exhaustion so just sleep for a bit longer okay? I'll watch over Maddy and make sure she doesn't get too overexcited."
Helplessly Jia Hyson just nods and relaxes back onto the couch. When he finally hears the man walking away and shutting the door he mutters, "Bebe, context please?"
"This is the novel, 'Can't stand the Heat.' It has low popularity and a rating of 2.3 stars out of 5." Bebe replies in his mind. Jia Hyson winces and not just from the way Bebe's voice makes his headache ache even worse than before. 2.3 out of 5 stars... Damn this sounds like one shitty story then. The lowest review he's ever gotten for any online works he'd anonymously posted was around 4 stars at least.
"What's the problem with it then?"
"The story has been given the following criticisms-
'What the hell! Where is the family fluff and cooking competition we were promised?! Why is this all smut?'
'It's like author-san has totally forgotten the MC's heartwarming background and family once the cooking competition starts! Isn't that too cruel? Not even a mention of them in the epilogue?? I don't even recognize the cool, headstrong MC by the end of it!'
'Too much smut! What drama story? What story about cooking? What romance subplot? It's just straight up porn!'
'How easy is the MC? Is the ML that handsome?? To be so rude and arrogant yet to quickly catch the MC after a single kiss? Unreasonable!'"
Listening to these angry comments Jia Hyson can feel his diminishing headache coming back again at full force. So this is what Bebe meant by fixing the plot? Why couldn't they just hire an editor? Why does it seem like his whole mission seems to rely on playing cockblock?
"An editor will not necessarily have the creativity we require to alter the story into a better one," Bebe explains as it reads his thoughts, "You however are well known for creating interesting and entertaining books and online fiction. Not to mention you have an abnormal mindset that potentially is very good for this sort of work."
Black lines cover his face. What abnormal mindset? Isn't that too rude? He happily jumps in to help and here he is getting his face slapped.
Anyway from the complaints it does actually seem like he must save this world through cockblocking. Isn't this just beyond stupid? Are they screwing with him?
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Is it better to be a Beta?
Teen FictionJia Hyson finds he has hit the jackpot after he dies. He's got a system! He's a transmigrator! So cool! System: "Please help us fix the plot." Jia Hyson: "Of course!" System: "Firstly there are too many love interests." Jia Hyson: "Okay." System: "...