A week has past
A blond laying unconscious beneath a shaded tree, a orange glow cast over
Him but it was slowly weakening,The natural tan having long since faded. Leaving a pale feverish Boy
Inside the seal
"Kit I cant keep this up, with this deal my power is limited you need to wake up " look towards the still figure laying outside of the cage containing the beast,
'something is wrong, him being the container he's supposed to be awake in the seal . Why? Is he dying ? Why cant I heal him like all the other times?' " was it because the brat struck the seal that must be it"
The beast then thought back on the day he was sealed inside the kit the night he was controlled into killing not only his mate and kits. But a good half of the villagers as well.Controlled and sealed that was his life
If he could save this kit maybe
he can break the chain of fate and finally redeem himselfBut only way to save the boy now was to break the seal and do a soul merge
"Goodbye kit. I hope I've redeemed some. " he said. Before surging his chakra hince breaking the seal.
Meanwhile
A year later
No one had see or heard from naruto since the battle. Several months have past and Many teams had been sent out in search of the blond and none successful. Thus the time limit was reached and tsunade was forced to label him mia.
~somewhere~
A new dawn fast approached as a figure ran tree to tree before stopping in the last branch before a camp if the intel was accurate the missing villagers were in this bandit camp,
scouting the tents locating the most viable location for the hostages.
The figure jumped from the tree into the light knowing the bandit where probably asleep or in a drunken stupor.Now revealed person was a medium height,slim figure with long pale blond hair that reached well past the hips
This person walked with purpose toward the tent the was deemed where the hostages had to be.
Upon entering the tent
The blond countered the group huddled together crying softly. One of the younger one that was crying for her momma looked up a screamed hysterically
" witch, it's the witch. Help me they took my momma" the other females hushed her, before looking at the witch,"why are you here" the blond said nothing before cutting the ropes binding them and jestering them to leave.
the youngest once again screamed for her mother this time noises were hear of people being awakened by the girl, pushing the girl toward the other females,
pointing away from the camp and then pointed at the tent where the kid's mother was presumably held a woman nodding and grabbed the girl and whispered something to her and the group quickly fled from the camp.The blond made his way towards the other tent he heard a scream from the tent. "Quiet or your whining daughter is next!!". "No please " the blond enter the tent and alerted the leader.
"Who are yo-" was all he got out before he was stabbed by the the blond.few of the bandits were wide awake from the noise of the woman screaming,one cam and asked
"boss are you ok" before coming in a yelling "who the hell are you". Seeing his boss dead on the ground,then ran to alert all the others in the brief pause of things. The blond look at the woman who barely had any clothes on an pointed to where the the others were sent and then made the motion of rocking a baby and then pointed in the direction again. " oh my baby is that way?" The woman some how connected the dots. The blond nodded
Taking off the cloak of the corpse and handing it to the woman before showing 1 finger signaling her to wait, the blond ran out and drew the attention of the bandits and a battle began.In another place around the same time
There were two ninjas traveling to the village on a mission to deal with the bandits
"HELP" they heard a cry as a group rushed at them.
"There the villagers" "Kakashi your right"a dark hair male returned his kunai that he'd drawn
"They have my mommy" a little girl cried."Are you the nin from the leaf?"
Both the nin nodded
"oh thank god" the females exclaim before telling them every thing that had happened.
"My mommy is still there" the smallest stated In tears "we'll save her"
The older nin states " since you are almost at the gate I'll have a shadow clone take you back son your safe " the females nodded and left with the clone. And the two nin make there way towards where the group had come from*ok guys here's today's chapter.
Its probably short and full of errors
But I'll go through later and edit
But tell me what ya think so far
Which is better so far the original version or this one ? *See ya tomorrow ya know
My lovely kits
Ps this is kinda what I envision the blond to be. Kinda
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Fanfictionthis is one of my stories being rewritten Smiles wish me luck