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Okay I'm just going to say this straight and plain. USE YOUR F*CKING DIALOGUE PROPERLY! YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BE F*CKING WRITERS! NOT PUSSY PREPS! I DHOULD KNOW, I WORK WITH THEM AND EVEN THEY DO BETTER!

Dialogue does NOT go like this:

Sadie: Ooh! I love your dress.

Jessica: Thanks!

It SHOULD be something like this:

Said looked over at her friend, she was wearing the is beautiful dress, "I love your dress," she said smiling.

"Thanks," Jessica replied returning Sadie's smile.

IT'S NOT THAT F*CKING HARD NOW IS IT? SO GET IT INTO YOUR HEADS AND GO FIX IT UP RIGHT NOW BEFORE I FIND YOUR STORY AND HAVE A GO AT YOU FOR IT!

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