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LGBTQ+: Has an LGBTQ character but not LGBTQ scenes
Status: Completed
Description:
Cause for him, it’s forever.
Review
Summary/Blurb:
Short and a little too short? I love how aesthetic it is but you basically wrote the same thing on the cover
Some readers might skip on your story because of your summary. In my opinion, it would be better to add some stuff under that. At least something little to draw readers in and make them fall in love with your story.
Summary Rating: 7/10
First paragraph of the first chapter:
It felt like those little monologues you hear at the beginning of a movie, it played out in my head like a movie scene.
First paragraph of the first chapter Rating: 7/10
Plot Development/Character Development:
The author started the story by giving us some memories of Ashley, these memories helped us feel the strong relationship/bond they have and how much they've been through.
The next chapter showed us more about the characters, their relationships and problems. I withhold any further statements about plot /character development to avoid giving spoilers
Plot Development/Character Development Rating: 9/10
Originality: Not so original, although the author seemed to use the cliché well. It's the typical best friends falling in love.
Originality Rating: 4/10
Cover Relevance/Design: Beautiful, I love how the author used a background picture of people holding hands, it's gorgeous.
Cover Relevance/Design Rating: 10/10
Dialogue/Description: it flows well; the author gives us relevant descriptions needed to feel the story vibe. The dialogue is also properly annotated.
Dialogue/Description Rating: 8/10
Interaction with Readers:
Though some comments were replied, I wasn't really impressed with the number of replies. They are quite few.
The only reason the rating is this high is because the author asked questions at the end of the chapters.
Interaction with Readers Rating: 7/10
Grammar/Spelling: The grammatical structure used is perfect for the intended audience/readers
Grammar/Spelling Rating: 7/10
My Opinion:
I enjoyed reading your book, but it was a little bit too cliché, thank you for sharing your book.
I recommend this book to readers who love reading teen fiction clichés
My Rating: 13.5/20
Overall Book Rating: 7.1/10
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