(this one is a bit aggressive and really personal, but I want to share it because I think the only way to improve yourself is to put yourself out there)
why
why are you so
obnoxious
you attention seeking
whore
we get it
drink
sleep
eat
you love us
its annoying
you shove it down our
throats
daddy this
daddy that
you fucking freak
wow cry more over your dead chicken
you are not cute
you are annoying
shut up
shut up
shut up
no wonder you can't
hold a relationship
youre clingy
sick to look at
cry some more cause
no one loves you
fucking homo
make another edgy joke
fucking emo
i cant stand listening to you
please shut up
please shut up
please shut up
you fat
disgusting
pig
YOU ARE READING
Fearful Minds
PoetryI just want to start sharing some of my poetry. I have a lot of my own pieces and most of it was written when I was in a kinda bad place. Though I would really like some criticism and feedback so that I can start working towards being a better poet.