The curse of the girls hair

Ian the vampire & the battle with the straw ghost

Ian POV
Well new school hope I don't go hungry
Teacher POV
Class settle down we have a new student
Ian:hi I'm Ian
Ga-eun: another bully
Ok sit by ga-eun
Raise ur hand
Ian:yes miss
Ga-eun:*looks out window*
Ian POV
Hey I'm Ian
Ga-eun:you talking to me
Yea u don't talk much do
Ga-eun: no I don't have friends
I could be ur friend
Gaeun POV
Thanks
Ian:No problem
Narrator
Weeks went by and they all became good friends and Kang-Lim opened up to them more
And my ship is sailing with Ian x Gaeun and Kang-Lim x Hari
The next day Ian was out of school and Gaeun was worried then kyun-woo was talking about Vampires and Gaeun remembered and she ran and you know what happened she fell off the cliff and her hero came and got her and u know the talk they gazed into each others eyes BUT he didnt leave they KISSEDD EKKKKKKK
KANG-LIM AND HARI GOT CAUGHT but they wasn't there on purpose
Kang-Lim POV
Look out
Gaeun and Ian:huh
Straw ghost:hehe
Gaeun and Ian: STRAW GHOST
Straw ghost:I got two this time
Straw ghost:and there lovers
Kang-Lim and Ian: don't touch them
Straw ghost:hehe *grabs Ga-eun and Ha-ri*
Ha-ri and Ga-eun:eh ahh
Hari and Gaeun:help
Kang-Lim and Ian:eh grr let them go now
Kang-Lim:forces of evil living souls can do without
Straw ghost:*gasp* goes over edge hehe
Ian:wait look
Kill me and they die to hehehe
Ha-ri and Ga-eun: *whimpers*
Kang-Lim:I can't do it now let them go
Straw ghost:pathetic humans ur so stupid hehe bye bye
Ian and Kang-Lim: NOOOOOOOO
Ian:I think I can find them
Kang-Lim:Wait hari ghost ball thing
*summons shinbi
Kang-Lim:Shinbi help the straw ghost took hari and Gaeun
Shinbi:Oh no this is bad this is bad
Both:Why
Shinbi:When the straw ghost takes someone u love it takes there soul to
Both:Wha..
Ian:oh gaeun grrr WE HAVE TO GET THEM BACK
Kang-Lim:ok
Doo-ri;I'm gonna help
All:Doo-ri
Doo-to:Yea I can use both of them me and Ha-ri's I can only summon ghost
Ian:Ok let's go
Kang-Lim:Um Ian we can't fly
Ian:Oh sorry
Ian:But first..
*locates them*
Ian:I found them
*grabs them*
At the abandoned warehouse
???:Well well well nice to see u again
Little bro
Ian:Gah..! ZION WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE
Zion:Oh nothing this ghost just dropped off my.... *licks fangs* Next MEAL
HA-ri and Gaeun:mmmmmmm *cries*
Ian:Grr Zion leave them alone
Zion:Ok *unties Ha-ri*
Ian:What about Ga-eun Grrr give her back to
Zion:Hmm since u gave her the ring she'll be my MEAL
Ian:GRRR
*kicks zion*
ZionOh little bro ur just a mere baby vampire u don't even have ur powers this mere mortal made you weak
*zion and Ian fights*
*ian falls down*
Gaeun:MMMMMMMMMMMMM *cries*
Zion:That mere mortal have made u weak
*Ha-ri sneak to untie gaeun*
Gaeun:I have a cut on my hand
*zion goes to hari*
*Gaeun sneaks to ian*
Gaeun:Pls wake up
Ian:Just run my brothers he's.... Too Strong
Gaeun:No
*blood drips to his mouth*
Gaeun:There u good now
Ian:Go hide
Gaeun:but
Ian:No buts
Gaeun:Please I wanna stay with you
Ian:NOWWWW!
*whimpers*
*kisses her*
Ian:I'll be fine
*wipes her tears*
*Doo-ri shipping to hard*
Ha-ri:K-Kang-Lim
Kang-Lim:Are you ok Hari
*faints*
Kang-lim:HARIIIIIII
*see mark grrrr*
Kang-Lim:YOU MONSTERRRRRR
Zion:WHAT NOT MY FAULT
*ian sneak attack*
Ian:Now GAEUN
Gaeun:But I don't want to leave u
Ian:Then take them to hide and u hide with then but has to be in the ware house
* Zion sees the sun rising*
Zion:Heh
*Pulls him up to the window*
Ian:Ahhh
Gaeun:IANNNNNN
Gaeun:SIS NOWWW
*Zion gets scared*
HOWWW DARE YOU
Gaeun:IIIIIAAAANNNN
Gaeun:PLS wake up pls
Ian:Ughh huhhh
*kisses*
Gaeun sister:My baby sis grew up
Gaeun sister:Now for YOU!!!
*throws in the sun*
Zion:Gah huh
Ian:*gets close to the sun* ZIONNNNNN
Gaeun: NOO
*falls to ground* ZIONNNNNN
Zion:*gets burnt*
Ian:All my family is gone now
Gaeun:I'm here forever
Gaeun:I'll meet u at our spot Tmr
Gaeun:Love you
*ian blushes like crazy*

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