i want you guys to know that i revised all published chapters of my story (chapters 1-5)
sana basahin nyo po ulit mula simula... (especially chapters 1-3 where i made lots of changes and added some scenes)
and comment po kayo kung ok lang ung story because i really don't know if this story is gonna be successful...
Pinalitan ko po ung name ni Ronald to Raven... because when i was writting this on my draft notebook, i felt that something's not right whenever i write the name "ronald"
i think that name doesn't fit the character so i changed it to "Raven" and BOOOOM i think it really fits the role...
please don't think that it's weird because as the author, it feels a little awkward when you write a story then you named him THIS but that name makes you think of someone but that someone doesn't reflect that character...
can't explain it... and now i'm thinking that i might be really weird, am i not?
by the way, the thing that i need the most now is feedback from you guys!
need some help to make this story much better ^u^
that's all! THANK YOU!!! :*
~kazUMI~
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