First of all this isn't an offensive book! im only here to give some tips on how to improve or oc. If you dont agree thats fine with me.
1. If the form is not complete you will not be chosen. If you need to go and cant finish the form, please say so before you go
2. This rating will be out of 50. 50 will be good and 1 will be bad. I dont this anyone will be given a 1 to 20 though
3. Dont HATE me if i give a low mark. like I said this book doesn't want to have any offense in it! If you dont agree then try a different one! Simple
4: This is only wings of fire (WoF). I'll try to add more later but Wof just for now
5: Hybrids are allowed but they cant be of more then 4 tribes
Thats all i have to say for now. The form will be on the next page!!!!
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OC rater
Random(Still working on cover) Just before i start I wold like to say this is not to offend anyone! This is all my personal opinion. If you don't feel I rated It correctly then thats fine. BUT DONT SPAM MY COMMENTS WITH "I think the oc is fine how it is"...