LEAVE IT UNBROKEN (Season 2 of THE PROMISE)

PART 6- SURPRISE!

PART 6- SURPRISE!

ELDRIDGE'S POV

Nagalit na si Gee.. Kasi nag hug yung dalawa.. Don’t worry IM NOT JEALOUS.. I should be happy pa nga kasi nalaman ko kung gaano ako kamahal ni Louise. Weee. But, I feel bad for Gian.. Muntikan niya ng banggain sila Louise pero buti na lang naiiwas ko yung manibela.. Pasalamat siya hindi nasaktan si louise, pag nagkataon AH AH!! Pero naiintindihan ko siya.. Masakit talaga sa part niya..

Things are not getting into place! Wow. Hilarious! Hmmph..

Nagpakagentle man ako, mamaya niyan kung anong gawin nito ni Gee.. So I come to a decision that I will drive her home.. my..

Pagdating namin nagpakuwento siya.. Kung alam ko ba daw na ganun yung situation.. I didn’t lie.. The point of lying is nothing.. I supposed to call Louise by now.. But I can’t see the right time.. Gian is kinda drunk! What a liberated girl she is.. She isn’t like this before. I mean, she’s good before.. She just changed!

We were in the living room.. When she stand in my front, we are very close at each other, literally.. And I do smell something fishy.. I can’t find that out!

Suddenly, she used to cupped my face with her hands.. And it made me react! WOOOOA. That’s out of the question

Well.. She, atlast speaks..   “Thanks for being with me Eldridge.. I owe you for this..” she laugh so soft, close enough for me to hear.

“No problem, you’ve been good to me naman.. You deserve to know.. ” she knew what I mean..  Then she made a quick glance at the door then KISS me! What the?! What is her problem..

The door opens then Louise show up! It’s wrong! I pushed Gian..

“Louise??!”  I asked in surprise.. I mean, I saw her.. But., AHHHHHHHH! This can’t be happening.. She may misunderstood it!

 “Surprise”  she said trying to put her hands on his eyes.. Is she crying?! Ugh! AGAIN! Because of my foolishness…

“Thanks… Miss you a lot guys..Ilove you both! Yea. Great! ”  I walk fast until I reached her.. I am trying to touch her but she neglected me..

“D-don’t you dare touch me.. No.. No.. Wala kang.. wala kang karapatan na hawakan ako.. You won’t have any.. and you’ll never have any chance to touch me,  ”  ahh. The words are just so real.. She really mean it. Gosh.. Im sorry.. After everything she had said to prove to Clark  that she loves me this is what I’m goin’ to give her.. I’m so unworthy!

“Louise let me explain….”  I really owe her an explanation, but me in myself really don’t have one.. Is this Gee’s plan?! How can I be so stupid?! Ooops. Sorry for the word I shouldn’t say that. Its just, MORE proper!

“I don’t’ think I need any of that..What I saw is enough .. Enough to prove to me that .. that you are unfaithful…You told me you want to marry me? How bad for me to believe its true! So, stop fooling around.. Kay.. ” Can’t she atleast give even a minute to defend myself.. Aww. I don’t deserve this treatment..

“Im sorry.. I..I… don’t..” I don’t have anything to say.. Coz I know she won’t listen..

“Sure sure.. Ofcourse you are.. ” AHHHHH.. I AM CRYING!

 “Yess.. oh.. My dearest former bestfriend.. isn’t it sweet?? Ahhh.. to see your love and your bestfriend KISSING??!! ” what the is the problem of this Gee for doing that!!! She used me!

 “Gee. Tumigil ka na!!!!!!”  I give her a hard grip.. Something that will give her a red mark on her arms..

“ofcourse it is..I am very touched after witnessing the moment I witness the scene he had with my best friend..Ohh. Sorry for the interruption..” But she seems to don’t consider me.. And the fact that we really kissed hurts the most.. Gaah! She really is hurting.. My heart is now breaking.. REALLY BREAKING.

“Glad you’ve loved the show.. What brings you here? .”  GIAN!!!i wanted to shout ! I wanted this to end.. Louise doesn't deserve to be hurt.. It should be me... Nagpadala ko kay Gian!

“Ahh. I was here to visit a friend.. ohh rather a traitor ex-bestfriend.. Need I say more?”  she’s right.. I knew her better than that.. Maybe she’s really DISAPPOINTED with what she saw..

“Look who’s talking..” sabi ni Gian.. I can't believe whats happening right now. I mean. They're best friends! But Gian hurts her.. She hurts Louise and thats out of the question.. I love Louise... more than she ever knew..more than anyone else knew..

“Gian. Enough.. Wala kang karapatang sabihan ng ganyan ang babaeng mahal ko?!!!!”

“Ohh. Eld. Pretending is over.. be it! Dalawang beses mo ng ginawa toh Eldridge.. At hindi ko mapaniwalaan na hinayaan kong saktan mo ulit ako.. Wala ka na bang ibang alam kundi saktan ako?*hik* Umasa. Nasaktan. Yun lang ang alam ko... Siguro nga hindi mo gusto tong nangyayare.. But.. Don't blame me for reacting this way.. Ganan ang nagawa ng sakit na binigay mo.. I WAS WILLING TO WAIT FOR YOU... WAS WILLING TO TAKE THE PAIN DISREGARDING THE YEARS IT WILL TAKE FOR YOU TO COME BACK.. BECAUSE I LOVED YOU THAT MUCH! I LOVED YOU TO THE POINT THAT IT'S KILLING MY HEART..  .”

sabi ni Louise habang pinapahid ang luha niya.. HOW COULD I BE SO STUPID.. SHE SAID IT. SHE'LL WAIT FOR ME! UNTIL I COME BACK.. PERO BAKIT KO HINAYAANG MANGYARE TOH? BAKIT UMABOT SA GANTO? BAKIT SA PANGALAWANG PAGKAKATAON, NASAKTAN KO SIYA NG SOBRA...  

Lumapit siya sakin.. at sinampal ako.. "Know what.. I got an answer to your question... "

Flashback..

"Will you wait? " i asked her. But she left.

End of Flashback

"Ofcourse!!!! It's my pleasure

to be your wedding's MADE OF HONOR   besides its my honor to have you and Gian once in my life ..  "

SHE DISAPPEARED!  I wanted to follow her.. But hindi nagmo-move ang paa ko.. We supposed to surprise her,,, but not this KIND OF SURPRISE!     

I turned to Gian.. She's not the same Gian I used to know... 

"Masaya ka na? " malungkot siya.. malungkot ang mukha niya pero nagulat ako nung sinagot niya yun..

"Sobrang saya.. ngayon alam ko.. hindi lang ako ang nag-iisang malungkot.. "

all I got to do is WALK AWAY  .. SHE'S UNBELIEVABLE... 

FOR THE RECORD. THIS WILL BE THE LAST TIME... I WILL HURT HER.. 

Babalik akong States bukas... and HINDI AKO BABALIK.. and I would never come back until I achieve T H E  P R O M IS E we have...

I WILL                L E A V E  I T  U N B R O K E N 

GIAN'S POV

I'm sorry Louise.. I know you're coming.. So I planned all this.. Wala na kong pakialam.. Sinaktan mo ko.. Pinaasa na ako talaga.. Napakalaki kong stupid para paniwalaan si Clark.. but I still love him..

I'm sorry Eldridge.. I didn't mean to get you involved.. 

I'm sorry Clark but I can't let you go..if losing my best friend is the only way to have you.. I'll take it..