My decision

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Okay, I made my decision and I'm going to rewrite it but don't worry! I'll keep this version up, I promise! I'd like to thank the people who commented and voted! Thanks a lot!

But on a serious note, the remake for this story may be more different than you would think. Example, something I want to change is Erwin; not his physical appearance but the way I made him some playboy stalker guy. Rereading my older work really disgusts me to tell the truth. Erwin acted like a fucking stalker and now that I'm older and more aware it makes me really uncomfortable, especially by the fact I used to think that's how a man should act! So yeah in the new book Erwin will not act like that, he'll also be less like a fun loving crazy guy. Erwin will be more intelligent and serious but I do honestly think he's a pretty chill and fun loving guy when he wants to be but yeah I'll try to make Erwin more in character AND NOT A FUCKING STALKER SICKO ASSHOLE. Anyway something else that will change is Eren; I personally love messing with Eren's eye color and sometimes hair but mostly his eye color. Why? Because it's just fun and in every series he's in his eye color is never the same! But I'm mostly going to focus on the way he acts! Eren would not be chill asf about being kidnapped! He wouldn't panic but he wouldn't be chill and then sit down and have breakfast with his kidnapper! Eren can handle VERY stressful situations without panicking but he wouldn't be friendly or kind to his kidnapper! So yeah him going to fix that! But I also want to state I'm still learning especially as a writer so please be patient with me, and especially about relationships! I want Eren and Erwin to have a good relationship, especially not one built on basically desperation and Stockholm Syndrome!

So yeah, that's what I wanted to say and I'll notifie you guys on when the remake is up.

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