Human Within - Percy Jackson Story

Prolog

I put a lot of work in this story but still it is not Perfect. First English is not my First language so it may be a lot of mistakes (I hope not) mad characters may be a little out if character but you will see that I tried to put something new in them.. Anyway thanks for giving it A try!
Enjoy! ~QB

"I disown you Percy! You are not longer my son. I am disgusted of you. You shall had no peace and water will be poison to you!" This words were The last thing that Percy Jackson heard from his father. He felt it. He felt like his heart had broke. Maybe it was mistake... Some prank or even that they just got another great prophecy for him. Then he felt power coming out of him. His godlish part faded. Slowly the sight of The gods on The trons became blurred. He knew what is happening. He was no longer a demigod and that meant he can't see through mist. It would require a lot of energy and practise to see greek world again. It was matter of seconds and he didn't saw angry face of his father. He didn't saw mount Olympus. He only saw The top of Empire State Builiding.

He felt to his knees. But not from lost. From pain. Poseidon's words struck him once again. "The water will be poison for you." He is made of water. He is poisonuss to himself. People started gathering and looking at him. But no one helped. Just like Then... when Hermes came to take him to Olympus. They just stared at him. They didn't want to help him.

He shouldn't have trusted that demigod. He used him and made him look like a traitor. Everyone belived him. Percy lost everything. He didn't had any friends anymore. He wasn't part of this any longer.

Pain started to be too much. He was burning from inside. Percy knew that end is near. He will die. After all this he will die. 

He started choking his own blood. He felt on the back. He couldn't see clearly. So this is the end.

He knew he is dead when he saw Tanatos. The god without single words gave him his hand and helped him to get up. Rather helped his soul leave his body. Percy last Time looked at himself. And then he greeted Tanatos like old friend.