-Backing Up-

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Dear Readers, 

With the recent comments and your feel about the story, I have realized that somewhere in the heat to update, I have lost the essence of the story and making it a drag. Thus, I have decided to re-think the progression of the story. Please understand that I am not giving up on the story or anything, but kind of re-evaluating its journey.

I felt that the current sequence, though it did deviate from Manan's confrontation, showed a side of Fab 5 where they would re-evaluate and realize their mistakes. Since it would be Fab 5, it would be fun, dramatic, unreal, but still have moments of sadness and internalization. Since it was their mistake, it would be unrealistic for them to just wake up one fine day and be "Sorry, Manik" without even trying to fix things in their own way. Since they are characters, they would have to go on their own route of emotional wreckage due to their baggage. May be, I am wrong or may be, among the pressure of exams and all, I conveyed it wrong. 

Anyhow, I see the trajectory and your expectations, thus, have decided to keep the next week or two to myself to understand and rewrite some past angles and future incidents. At this point, I don't know how much I will change and what will. But, I promise, somethings like Manan's confrontation, the basic story line and my assumptions as previously mentioned, will be constant.  

Thanks for all the openness. I love it that it was the eye-opener and please, don't be sad.  

Happy reading! 

HF

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