Demon slayer : demon Tanjiro (paused)

Part 1

Hey guys this is a fanfic about demon Tanjiro honestly I don't have much to say so enjoy.

Tanjiro's P.O.V:
"It's freezing out here" I thought to myself. "At least I sold all that charcoal, now I can go home." Something had smells ,Looking down I heard A distance voice say "Hey Tanjiro!"
I looked up. It was just Old Man Saburo. "Yes?" I answered. "You shouldn't walk alone at night, there's demons!" He reminds me up my grandma, She used to tell me stories like this all the time. "Grandma?" I instantly covered my mouth "What'd you'd call me?!" He said with a tint of anger in his voice. "S-sorry!" The smell I smelt earlier became even more stronger, it was definitely messing my sense of smelling. Then I smelt blood, I'd have starting running. "Hey kiddo! Where you going?!" His voice and almost every sound became inaudible. Every sound except my heartbeat, my heart was beating so fast. As I ran up the mountain the scent of blood became stronger I had no idea how fast I was going, I couldn't focus on anything, "Please! Please! Please!! No"
I had finally reached the top of the mountain.
A tall man who looked like he was in his early 20's stood by now broken down doors his hands covered in blood. He was choking my little brother. "TAKEO!!" I yelled. The tall demon looked back at me. At I started running him with my hatchet. "predictable." The demon said, still running he had dropped Takeo "Huh.?" As I look up at the demon "TANJIRO!!" Takeo had yelled. As I was now getting choked up in mid air. I tried to kick him but I couldn't reach. "What do I do?!" I thought to myself. "Huh?" The tall demon has now cut himself, I was confused
"Drink up." He was now forcing his arm to my mouth, as I tried to resist his strength was unbeaten. Now he had finally made me drink his blood, "huh..?" Nothing's happening...
I looked up as his plum eyes, they we're glowing...? Sudden pain had struck everywhere all over my body. I was now bent down on the ground, my eyes felt like they'd fall out.
It felt like my body was gonna pop I had started screaming. I couldn't focus at anything "That should keep you distracted, I have some unfinished Business to attend to." As he walked away everything had faded to black.

Cliffhanger
Did you guys enjoy? I really hope you did. Cause this is currently my first fanfic, so hope you guys enjoyed!