Loren and Eddie were hanging out all day. They watched t.v. played video games, kissed and it was around 7:30 which meant Nora would be home soon.
Eddie: Hey Lo I got to go don't want Pops to freak out. I will call you later?
Lo: Sure! Loren was a lttle disapointed Eddie had to go but she understood why. Bye Eddie, oh and thanks for making me feel better about today.
Eddie: Anytime Miss Loren Tate. Bye Eddie kissed Loren one last time then left. Loren felt really tired for some reason even though she had like 3 cups of coffee. Loren started to slowly drift off to sleep. Nora came home and noticed Eddie's car was gone. She went to check up on Loren.
Nora: Hey Lo dinners ready! Lo! Nora went to Lorens room to find her asleep. Nora went over to Loren and started to shake her. Loren wasn't waking up. LO!!! LO WAKE UP! Nora grabbed her phone and called Mel.
Phone Call
Mel: Hey Nora whats up?
Nora: MEL I CANT WAKE UP LO!!! SHE FELL ASLEEP MEET ME AT OUR HOUSE NOW! SO YOU CAN HELP ME TAKE HER TO THE HOSPITAL!!!
Mel: Oh my god! Ill be right over, call Max and tell him to meet us there.
Nora: Ok
Phone Call Ended
Nora graabed Loren and picked her up and carried her outside. Mel had just arrived they grabbed there phones and purses and left to go to the hospital. When they got to the hospital, Nora started screaming.
Nora: HELP HELP I NEED HELP!!!!
Nurse: Whats wrong?
Nora: I dont know! My daughter was hurt today and got a broken arm, a little brain damage, mild concussion. I came home she was asleep and she won't wake up!
Nurse: Ok bring her this way, they put Loren in a room for testing. Mel and Nora waited in the waiting room. Nora called Max and Mel called Adam.
Phone Calls
Max: Hey Nora whats up?
Nora: Max get to the hospital Lorens in the hospital!!! Nora was now crying.
Max: I will be right there hold on tight.
Nora: Thank you so much Max.
Phone Call Ended
Phone Call
Mel: Adam please come to the hospital Lo's in here. Mel was crying afraid of what might have happened to Loren.
Adam: Oh my Im coming Mel hold on tight.
Mel: Thanks Adam.
Phone Call Ended
EDDIE
Eddie: Hey pops where are you going?
Max: To the hospital Nora called apperantly Loren is in the hospital.
Eddie: What happened?
Max: I dont know if we leave now we can find out quicker.
Max and Eddie left for the hospital. Eddie felt like his whole world was crashing First the world had to take his mom away from him and now Loren. Why? Why them? They quickly got to the hospital.
Max: What room is Loren Tate in?
Nurse: Im sorry sir, Loren Tate is in testing please wait in the waiting with the two young ladies. Max and Eddie ran to Nora and Mel. They see that they have been crying. Mel is being comforted by Adam while Max went to comfort Nora.
Eddie: Nora what happened?
Nora: I..Dont...Know. I came home from work with dinner I called Loren but she didn't respond. So I went to her room with her sleeping so I shook her but... Nora started crying again. I couldn't wake her. I tried eveything, nothing worked. Right when Nora finished the doctor came out.
Doctor: Family of Loren Tate?
They all went to the doctor. Thats us.
Doctor: Im sorry to say this but Miss Tate is dead.
Mel and Nora broke down crying. Adam was tearing up.
Max: Do you know what caused it?
Doctor: Yes it seems when she fell asleep her pain and injuries kicked in and her body couldn't hold it any longer. She slipped into the coma, and her body couldn't survive so she passed Im so sorry.
Max: Will she ever wake up?
Doctor:Im terribly sorry for you loss. You may go see her.
Eddie: Nora, Max you go first. Then Mel and Adam and then I'll go.
Nora: Thanks Eddie.
LOREN
Where am I? What is this place.
Nora: Hey baby girl I wish you were here.
Loren: Mom! I right behind you turn around. Hey whose that on the hospital be... NO that can't be me!!
Max: Loren even though I didn't know you that long I realized your the perfect daughter I almost had. I wish you would wake up so I could hug you one last time. Max started to cry. Mom and Pops walk out of the room crying.
Loren: Mom Pops wait!!!! MEL! Adam!
Mel: Hey Lo, Im sorry Leah hurt you so bad that this is how it became the outcome. Please come back to me your the sister I never had. Please Lo Please. Mel walked out crying.
Adam: Hey Lo I know you can't here me but if you could I would tell you that you have crazy music talent and that you should sing in front of people. Please come back for me, Mel, Nora, Max and especially Eddie.
Lo: OH Adam!!!!
Eddie: Hey gorgeous! Thought that I would tell you goodbye. I just got you back today and Im already loosing you. That's not fair, first my mom. Now you? Why does the universe hate me so much? There's one thing that I want to tell you. I LOVE YOU!!!!! I wish you were here to say it back but since your not. I got you this ring to show you how much I love you! Its a one week anniversary since our first kiss. Eddie put the ring on Loren's hand kissed her on the lips one last time with all the passion he had. Eddie walked out the door crying.
Lo: E-EDDIE COME BACK! I LOVE YOU TO!!!!!!!!!
The doctor heard a beep on the machines. The monitor started to go crazy. Loren's heart rate started to rise like she was coming back from the dead. They had seven different doctors, in the room.
