Chapter 5

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Nora, Max, Mel, Adam and especially Eddie were all in the waiting room crying. They were all sitting when they saw doctor's running in and out of Loren's room. They saw a doctor and Nora ran up to her to talk to her.

Nora: What's happening to my daughter?

Doctor: Mrs. Tate, it seems that Miss Tate's heart is beating and her temperature is rising. She might actually live.

Nora: WHAT? I thought she was d-dead. Nora was relieved that she was alive.

Doctor: We do have one question.

Nora: Anything.

Doctor: Well before you all visited her Miss Tate was gone. Then slowly she was coming back after one of you guys talked to her. Who talked to her last? Everyone slowly turned towards Eddie, whose eyes were puffy and relieved that Loren was gonna live.

Max: Eddie what did you say to Loren when you went to talk to her?

Eddie: Just tha she needs to come back to me. I just got her back and that I love her... Eddie said with his voice trailling off.

Nora: You said what?! Nora said relieved and mad.

Eddie: Just that I love her. Eddie said with his half smile that would make you feel like your flying.

Doctor: Thanks to you Miss Tate might just mak... The doctor was being pulled back into Loren's room. Everyone waited hours til finally that the doctor came back out.

Doctor: Well its seems that...

LOREN

Am I still in the hospital? I wish that my mom was here right now. Or Mel or even Max and Adam. I defininalty wish that Eddie was here. What happened how did I even get in the hospital? Why was everyone crying. It looks like I'm just sleeping. Am I even breathing? Of course I am I mean I'm right here watching myself. Hey wait who are those people looking, touching my body. Why are they getting blurry. Why am I fading away? No stop! NO!

DOCTOR

Did Miss Tate just scream? Everyone was looking at Miss Tate when she suddenly woke up screaming no! I have to tell the Tate family.

EDDIE

The doctor came over to us. He looks worried and relieved. What does he have to say.

Doctor: Well it seems that Miss Tate is perfectly fine..

Everyone: Yes!

Max: Wait were you going to say something else?

Doctor: Yes, she woke up screaming, crying shouting Mr. Duran's name.

Eddie: May I please go see her? Eddie said with hope in his voice.

Doctor: Of course, but you will have to wait there is someone else in her room with her.

Eddie: Who?

Doctor: Says his name is Trent McCall.

Everyone was confused except Nora she looked furious..

LOREN

"Knock knock knock"

Lo: Come in

Loren opened her eyes hoping that it would be her mom, Mel or Eddie. But suddenly regretted letting him in.

Trent: Hey Loren I'm so happy that you'r ok.

Lo: What do you want? Why would you come back after 14 years later?

Trent: Because I just found out you were dead and now you'r alive.

Lo: WHAT DO YOU MEAN DEAD? LEAVE NOW!!!

Trent: No Loren. Im sorry please listen to me.

Lo: NO!!!!! I SAID GET OUT!!!!!

Loren's heart rate started to rise, She was coughing, and hyperventalating. Doctors came rushing in and told the man to leave. Trent kept refusing.

Trent: NO she's my daugher, I will stay, I have a right.

Lo: TRENT OUT!!! Please just get Eddie. I...need...him...right...now. Loren said in between breaths.

Doctor: Yes Miss Tate, sir you need to leave.

Trent: Loren don't waste you'r time, he's only going to leave like everyone does in you'r life. You'r not good enough for everyone. You'r the reason why I left.

Nora: GET OUT!!!!! NOW!!!!

Max: Trent you need to leave before we call security.

Trent: Whatever Loren just think about what I said. You know its the truth.

The doctor, and everyone left the room but Eddie. Eddie ran to Loren and hugged and kissed her all his passion.

Eddie: Oh Lo! I thought you weren't going to make it.

Lo: Eddie I couldn't leave you without telling you something.

Eddie: What is it? Eddie said why worry, and sadness in his voice.

Lo: Eddie calm down its ok. I just wanted to say that I love you to!!!

Eddie: I love you too!!! Eddie kissed Loren with everything he had, they sat up and things were getting hot and intense. Hey Lo can I ask you something?

Lo: Sure Eddie, what is it?

Eddie: What exactly did you'r dad want and what did he say?

Lo: Oh. Just that he was sorry. Then he said that everyone is going to leave me just like he did. Then he was telling me that I'm the one that drove him away, I'm the one that ruined my parent's relationship the one who broke them up. Loren started to cry, she tried to stay strong but it was to hard to see him.

Eddie: Lo it's ok, I'm not gonna leave and you didn't ruin you'r parents relationship. He's the one that left to goregous, fabulous women. I love you Miss Loren Tate, nothing will ever change that.

Lo: I love you to Mr. Eddie Duran. One question.

Eddie: Anything.

Lo: Why did Trent say that I was dead?

Eddie:....

Lo: Eddie? Tell me. Please

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