Shot 1 - Part 1

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So the central idea is Neil got married to a village girl obviously Avni .. she is well educated and all but Neil is not happy at all but ma ke force pe karli shaadi . So there is a twist in the plot jo story ke sath pata chalega .

Abhi it sounds boring lekin aage bhaut zyda interesting hai .

Avneil's house

"Avni... Avni ... meri coffee kha hai ?", Shouted Neil from the dining table ."Mujhe late ho raha hai Police Station jaane ke liye .. "

"Aaayi ", came Avni's voice from the kitchen followed by Avni .

She placed the coffee on the table .
"Mein nastha leke aati hu "

"Nahi rehne do ", said Neil .
"Mein Police Station jaake kuch kha lunga "

"Nahi .. asia bina kuch khaye ghar se bhaar jana acha nahi hota Neil ji "

"Yaar tum aur tumahre superstitions .. rakho unko aapne pass .. mein ja raha hu ", said Neil and turned to leave .

"Neil ji-

"Kya hai .. ", asked Neil in a irritated tone ."Jaane wale ko toukna nahi chayie aisa superstition nahi sikha kya ?"

"Aap hi ne kha tha inme vishwas nahi karna ", said Avni

"Bye ", said Neil bluntly

"Suniyo toh Neil ji... ", she ran behind him .

"Kya hai ? ", Asked Neil

"Aaj shaam ko bahar chale .. ? ", Asked  Avni while playing with her saree palu.

"Nahi .. busy hu .. case hai "

"Kal ?"

"Nahi .. Kal bhi kaam hai "

"Kal sunday hai ", pouted Avni

"Tumahra pati dev police mein kaam karta hai .. saturday- sunday chuti nahi hoti "

"Agle hafte ", asked Avni hopefully.

"Dekhnege .. ", replied Neil and ran outside .

Avni sighed and dailled up someone on the phone ."Hello .. ha Neil chala gaya Police Station ... tu saaara kaam dhandha chodke ghar aja .. "

"Thoda kaam hai Avni "

"Abey oye nautanki .. khub janti tu tera kaam .. tapak jaldi warna udhar ake uda dungi "

"Ati hu na mata .. paach minutes de "

Police Station

"Apko problem kya hai Avni Bhabhi se .. itni achi toh hai woh ", asked Dd . Acp saab ke Colleague kum dost .

"Dd ... bhaut zyda gharelu hai ... Kal meine job karne ki baat ki toh mujhpe bhadak gayi ki 'aapke hote hue mujhe kaam karne ki kya zarurat hai ' "

"Sir abhi woh jiss jagah se hai waise hi sochegi na ..m ", said Dd

"Thoda modernized hona bhi toh zaruri hai .. meine usse din kha ki shopping pe chalte hai .. tumahre liye kuch normal kapde lete hai .. madam sadiya uthake layi "

"Toh apko ladki kaisi chayie Sir ? ", asked Dd while banging his head .

"Yaar meko toh koi police wali chayie thi .. you know hum Ghar se zyda crime scene pe rehte .. aise mein agar ek chauki pe posting hoti toh....

"Ha bhavna pouch gayi .. baas baas aur details mat do ", said Dd while closing his eyes .

Neil smacked his arm ."Abey .. kuch bhi mat soch .. "

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