She is in a coma?!?!?!?!

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CARL'S P.O.V

Its been about 5 days since Crimson passed out and I am starting to get worried that she is dead but her chest is moving up and down so that's a sign that she's alive but I don't understand why she isn't waking up maybe I'll ask Dale why she isnt waking up so I walk to Dale and ask "Dale its about Crimson." He looked at me worried and asked "What about Crimson?" I sighed and said "Why hasn't she woken up yet I know she's alive cause her chest is moving up and down so she isn't dead but why hasn't she woken up yet?" Then he said "Follow me please." Then I starred following him to the cell that Crimson was in and he said "The only way to find out if someone is in a coma is to grab their arm and hold it above their face and drop it to see if it hits their face cause a person that is sleeping won't let their hand hit their face but a person that is in a coma will let their hand hit their face." And at that time i looked really worried and I nodded and said "Let's see." Then he grabbed her arm and then held it over her face and then he let go of her hand and it hit her right in the face and I was scared and worried that Crimson might never wake up from her coma then a tear slipped from my eye and I looked at Dale and asked "Can I have a lone time with Crimson please?" He nodded and left and I couldn't hold in the tears in any more and I just bursted into tears I felt hurt like it was my fault that she got hurt then my dad walked past the cell I was in crying in and stopped and then turned around and walked to me and asked "What's wrong Carl what happened?!?!?!" I looked at him and said "You were there you saw it he shot Crimson HE SHOT CRIMSON AND NOW SHE'S IN A COMA CAUSE OF HIM HE'S THE REASON WHY IM CRYING HE'S THE REASON WHY SHE GOT HURT AND HE'S THE REASON WHY I WANT TO KILL HIM." I didn't mean to yell but it came out and now I am passed off but then I just fell to my knee's and cried hurt that she's in a coma and its all cause of him the reason she's in a coma cause he shot her. Then my dad hugged me and said "I'm so sorry Carl I know how you feel." Then I said "No you don't Dad you dont know how I feel I thought you died in your coma and I thought I never would see you again but then I saw you and I was happy and i never wanted to have another person I care for in a coma but I met Crimson and I was happy and I didnt want anything to happen to her but now look at her SHE'S IN A COMA CAUSE OF HE FATHER CAUSE HE SHOT HER IN THE SHOULDER I NEED TO FIND HIM AND KILL HIM!!!!" Then I stormed out of the cell and stormed to mine and grabbed my riffle and then my dad said from Crimson's cell and said "Carl stop." He said sternly making me not stop till he ran up to me and grabbed my shoulder and said "Carl stop." Then I turned around and said realy pissed off "WHAT DAD WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU WANT?!?!?!" Then he said "You need to stop you cant do ths you will di trying to kill him." I said through my teeth coldly "Then i'll die trying." Then I shrugged his hand off my shoulder and then I walked off again leaving my dad heart broken but I remember him saying 'We need to make tough decisions and no more kid stuff time to grow up and be a man and that peiple will die even him and mom' so thas what I'm going to do I'm going to kill the Governor once and for all.

A/N HEY GUYS SO HOW DO YOU THINK CARL WILL KILL THE GOVERNOR AND DO YOU THINK CRIMSON WILL WAKE UP FROM HER COMA BEFORE ANYTHING BAD HAPPENES OR DO YOU THINK SHE WILL WAKE UP WHILE CARL IS GONE TRYING TO KILL HER FATHER PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT OF WHAT YOU THINK WILL HAPPEN AND PLEASE VOTE AND FOLLOW AND SHARE PLEASE AND THANK YOU OH AND THE PICTURE IS CRIMSON A.K.A ME YEAH IM CRIMSON :)

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